I like your storys, but:

“ Guten aven sir .” ?

"Guten Abend, Sir." also: "Good evening, sir?" ?

And:

"Guten abend , Herr Crawford"

Thats right, but in German it is:

"Guten Abend, Herr Crawford."

Guilty, ja, but in German: 'Schuldig', not 'Schuldich'.

And Chapter 5

Mein klein kaninchen

Thats not right.

Mein kleines Kaninchen , thats okay, or :

Mein kleiner HaseMein kleines Häschen.

Than 'my love', not in this story, but in a other. It means in German not mein liebMeine Liebe is the rightest, it means "My love". But Mein lieb is absolut wrong.

So. If you want something to know in German, ask me. Im a German. Thats why my english is so bad ;

Bye, Kathy

(Cas450 )

*Cry of the captive sock puppet*: Update me! Please! Yes! Thank you!

0_0 ::speechless:: Such cruelty to Ken from Crawfish. Hehe... Keep it up. Ken is perfect no matter what! ::giggles like a maniac::

Here we have Crawford and his manservant Farfie. Suddenly Crawford's in a weird, Gomez Adams type role. Farfie becomes Lurch...such an odd brain I have.

Oh dear, what is Farfie being employed to do? I'm not sure I want to know...kinda scary...lots of thoughs, none of them good.

Ah! Ken wakes! And Schu! Such Schufull goodness. Schu seems a bit more sympathetic here, which is kinda nice, I usually see Schu as a bastard with a purpose type guy. Defense mechanisms and all that, whereas Crawford's just an obsessive ass, as I've mentioned before. So then, maybe I'll be able to keep up now that things like Anime Expo and life are back in order. Woot! Write on my friend, I eagerly await!

*grins* It's the Ayacycle, Mach 2!

"He enjoyed the thought that the meddling sonuvabitch was probably rock-hard "

Again with the echhi thoughts, you really need to watch these phrases, they can stop a fangirl mid-read and then she has to read things over until her mind's out of the Hentai Bento Box.

Crawford is still crazy with his obsession with perfection...too much of it being sinful and all...crazy Crawford. Years from now, Ken will be gumming his food, swinging on a porch and talking about how he was abducted by "Crazy Crawford." *snickers* I like that thought. Read on!

Late again...my lord so late. But at any rate, on with the storm of reviews...yet another mid-chapter writing boost. *Waves flag*

Crawford is an ass...I must say this in every other review of your stories...so and so is an ass...and it's true, because people are asses and you're telling it like it is, which I enjoy. But, this doesn't lessen the fact that Crawford is an ass, an obsessive ass, and a fine piece of ass to be sure, but he still encompasses a general ass-ness that is the elusive "Crawfordness."

And Aya rushing off to his "Cabin" that I will now call the Aya Cave, to get his "motorcycle" which I will now call the Ayacycle...I was singing "...Aya!" the entire time. Aya has more theme music than any other character I know of.

"The sight of the tall man with a soiled young boy "

Now, I know what you meant by "soiled" but I read that line and I have the most ecchi thoughts. "Soiled" can mean so many things, you know...must stop reading doujinshi.

I don't know why, but I love the rabbit mittens so much, so very much. When winter comes, I'm getting blue bunny mittens dammit. And no, I didn't hit my head, just fell with a mighty BOOM! On to the next chapter, ar!

O_O the sudden schu-ness of it all just jumps out at me... ::is attacked by the schu-ness:: XD funness nyo... although, what part will schuldig play in this, hmm? what with crawfie's not so innocent intentions... DAMMIT RAN, WHERE ARE YEW? T_T schuschu! save him from the evil clutches of the uber hot but apparently crazy american madman!

... ::sigh:: that felt good. XD ready fer the next installment nyo. kyahaha...

Yesyes! Ken'll always be a sexy beeyach no matter what! XD

Though I don't really know much about Ran and the Crashers, I'm sure the guy in white (Knight) is the leader _

You should know who Kuroe is if you looked at the Side B stuff that I sent you. _

great fic! KEEP IT UP! i luv ur other fics as well, so update ur other fics more!

Why haven't I seen this fic befforre... *applauds* I can't wait for the next part!

Now I must run for I am late for work... *runs*

::smirk:: The more I read, the more snarky I get... and sadistic. XD woot! crawford slapped kenken! ::tsktsk:: such a possesive man, ne? and ayan... kekekeke... wonder what kind of man he is wit ken? ish he nicer? ish he less anal retentive... ::sigh:: good chappie, although more like an interlude thing. ::pout:: XP

ken: *whine* are we there yet?

brad: no, now shut up.

Rawr! Poor Kenken...his perfect face...*sniffle* Ah, well...he's still cute anyway! X3 Keep on going! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Yes! Anti-(you-know-who)x(what's-his-face)! I'm starting to like KuroexKen, though X3 Oh...right...you don't know who he is...yet...

o_o Short chapter! Are you teasing me? o_o What's Braddybrad going to do to Kenken? What about Ayan? Is Ayan going to save him? AH.

o_o

i agree that too much perfection is sinful, braddybrad.

...so why don't you have over that too-perfect kenken over there to become unsinful? :D

-Shime

Ew...OmixKen/KenxOmi...*twitch* I'm mostly for Brad/Schu/YohjixKen (Farf/RanxKen is good too...). Dunno why, but I can't stand fanfics with Ken as the uke. Almost everything about his screams uke...at least *I* think so...

Yumm... BradxKen...*drool* It's strange, but I like Brad acting all...i dunno...mean? Anyway, keep on going! XD