So I just binged read this story and I got to say that I really like your writing. I've really enjoyed this story so far. I read some of your other stories but this one is definitely my favorite. I seriously can't wait for the next chapter, especially since were starting to get to a point where Mythra is starting to become more prevalent. Peace out and stay safe, especially with everything happening in the world right now!

This story really has a different feel from other Xenoblade 2 stories I've seen so far, Vaios and Pyra relationship just got steamy which makes Mythra reaction when she ended up in the guys even funnier, i wonder what he was like in the past because it makes wonder if there's going to be your version of torna the golden country which could explore addam and vaios past in more detail and i hope you keep going with this story because it's got me hooked.

Love the story

I'm going to put it bluntly: Vaios is literally Rex with Addam's face.

While I do appreciate the fact you've managed to come so far into this fic, I seriously cannot help but scoff at how your OC is literally Rex with a few dents.

Moral-wise, he may be not so indifferent to selling weapons, but overall he fells really...dull. Like there is no life in his actions. Like he's a record who is playing all of the Xenoblade II dialogue at me like my current playthrough.

I'll keep reading, but it would definitely have helped if this story had started out differently from the game. Not a very good first impression.

I guess Tora learned the lesson in not opening the door without knocking first or at least hear the person respond to it.

Wow, did not expect them to actually do it. Poor Tora he had to see end result. XD

Love the chapter and looking forward to the next one.

Well that was quite the revelation.

i can't wait how Vaios and Mythra past relationship affects this story and I'm even more interested in Vaios origin with this chapter.

The power that Vaios has, where he absorbs ether himself is very interesting. I like to see more of his past. But the part with Mythra was awesome. Guess the bond that Vaios had with her in the past holds strong even if he doesn't have all of his memories.

I really want to know what happened in the past.

I decided to give your story a read mostly on a whim. At first I was concerned that it'd be a rehashing of the exact same thing but with an OC, but as I continued to read I was pleasantly surprised that wasn't entirely the case. Having a certain someone on a different side already has immense implications for the story, and I can't help but imagine that further chapters will lead to even more changes.

All in all, I'd say I'm definitely satisfied with the story thus far, and I'm looking forward to reading more!

This is pretty cool. I’m actually curious on what impact Vaios had in the past during the events of Xenoblade Chronicles 2 Torna the Golden Country.

Nice to see this story is not dead.
Great chapter, can't wait for the next one.

Ooooh i'm really liking this so far! Can't wait for mythra to make an appearance-ooo im so excited for the potential vaios/mythra moments!3
(As much as i love pyra obviously i do like mythra just a wee bit more obviously she always makes me laugh with her scenes.)