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Sora Kamiyama chapter 4 . 6/29
Plz update
Guest chapter 1 . 6/8
Good story but why does Naruto have the same ms powers as Itachi each ms gives the user deferent powers the only people that have the same power in there eyes are Sasuke and Itachi but there brothers and Sasuke only has Amaterasu and not tsunami
IceyBoi2003 chapter 4 . 4/20
CONTINUE THIS STORY! IT'S GREAT!
Ricardo Soto chapter 4 . 4/15
Great writing, I don’t blame Narutos hate for his parents his upbringing can give a child emotional trauma that can be hard to recover from. Although with his whole ideal off breaking the cycle of hatred you will eventually have naruto forgive them slowly as time goes by. In terms of pairings I think naruto and Naruko could make for a good write after all they didn’t grow up as normal siblings so the possiblity of them having romantic feelings for each other can be their. Even if it is incest in the naruto world bloodline clans did practice incest like the Uchiha and Hyuga so it’s not uncommon. Just my opinion rather not see naruhina simply because even tho I like the pairing it’s overused and is easily the most written pairing in naruto fanfiction so I would rather see naruto paired with his sister. Regardless hope to see an update soon!
damienfarrar10 chapter 1 . 4/11
Good start to the story
Cookietime chapter 4 . 4/2
More pls
Guest chapter 4 . 1/21
Off topic: What if there was a naruto fan-fiction about Naruto be abandoned by his family. Minato already makes a Naruto’s siblings under Kakashi. While Naruto is going be the apprentice to Tsunade, Jiraiya, Kushina & himself before retaking the Hokage title. Minato give Naruto the head of the Namikaze clan. In the hopes that all this would have Naruto forgive them for their abandonment of him. Naruto’s siblings are the ones to be married off to other villages.

What if Fugaku Uchiha & the Uchiha Clan wants to actually help my faking their deaths & they told Itachi play the double agent but don’t tell Sasuke.

When the Orochimaru tried give Sasuke his cursed Mark. Mikoto Uchiha & Fugaku Uchiha appeared to save their son.
Leannegeorgiabirks18 chapter 4 . 1/5
Please update
Lightrazer chapter 4 . 11/11/2019
I really like how you have made this concept your own. While giving Minato EMS is a buff he really did not need, because he is strong without it, possibly mastering Senjutsu as well by this point, but for 4th War Arc, if you ever get to that point, I can see the reasoning behind it. Your reasoning for Minato living through the sealing also works because in each canon instance, the target has someone sealed inside the user. If this was to work, at the very least a good chunk of his life force would be gone as payment.

Also, rehashing the whole, Soul/Chakra split into Yin/Yang split is very fresh and appreciated for a fic written so long after we learn about how the sealing actually went down.

In summation, this is a refreshing take on an old concept without most the angst associated with it and more "human" characters.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/23/2019
Why? Stupid cliff hanger
zero fullbuster chapter 4 . 10/16/2019
Love it.
Please write more.
monsterkillers124 chapter 4 . 10/7/2019
I like this story will there be any updates to it anytime soon
Blackwolfman9000 chapter 4 . 9/21/2019
How about Yugito Nii for Naruto's pairing or Yugao Uzuki
Guest chapter 2 . 9/17/2019
Kushina-sama? What does that mean? Could you translate it to English. I was taught in grade school to write in English. The language of your audience as well as your own story.

I know you think using those suffixes shows you are part of some it crowd. The “real” naruto fanfiction writers or whatnot. Whatever you tell yourself, you’re wrong. Normal people do not mix and match syntaxes of different languages because it’s sounds horrendous and NEVER translates the way you wish.

Read your dialogue out loud. Have friends read it out loud and listen to what it sounds like. Any normal person reading this story and seeing those Japanese suffixes are going to think what the hell is wrong with this author.

It’s so simple. This is an English language story. Thus, I should write using English.
Uchiha chapter 4 . 8/28/2019
Man you guys that think naruto is a whiney bitch who the fuck you think you are it's just a story for Christ's sakes there are other stories where naruto was abandoned but none of u guys dont know how much Mental damage it can do to a young kid, just now finding out he had parents that he never knew existed now knows that they're alive and that they abandoned him in the village, a village full of hypocrites where they all hate his guts because he carries the nine nails fox in him. Be in his shoes imagine the mental crap you would be going through being told that your father is a bastard that screwed a whore and left ya, just imagine how much damage that can do to a kid and that's what he is going through right now he doesnt know how to deal with this the only thing that goes thru his mind is that his parents abandoned him in a village that was trying to kill him for twelve years straight anybody would gone mad and a Jinchuriki would go nuts and kill everyone.
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