Welcome to the class Sayo!

Nitpicks:

1) "Ako honestly did mind." : "Ako honestly didn't mind."

2) "Natsumi-san as she and Makie-san finished hanging up the last of the ceiling mounted decorations." : "Natsumi-san asked as she and Makie-san finished hanging up the last of the ceiling mounted decorations."

3) "Negi-sensi said when he saw Kazumi walk in." : "Negi-sensei said when he saw Kazumi walk in."

4) ""...Some things we do have ended up sideways."" : ""...Some things we did have ended up sideways.""

I wonder if ranma will ever go into a patio. If she were itd be eve or her sister.

Damm you just keep making this story better and better. I just love ranmas magic element. It's not usually an elemt people would consider for Ranma but you kind of make it work whilst giving it a sinister edge.

P. S. I would totally love to see a certain Amazon show up again to face this ranma

Good start to the series . I kind of forgot most of it so I'm rereading it.

ah right, and if I remember correctly, Yue's artifact is a spell search engine in hardback, complete with everything needed to make it a grimoire

Very close call for Yue there.

Nitpicks:

1) "I'm not even holding back with the evasions even." : " I'm not even holding back with the evasions."

2) "Eva was about to open her mouth to tell her apprentice as much when the wards of the resort suddenly went off and the sound of alert sirens resounded throughout the sealed space" : "...space."

3) ""...Teaching whoever this trespasser the consequences of their actions is just what the doctor ordered."" : "...Teaching whoever this trespasser is the consequences of their actions is just what the doctor ordered.""

4) "Nodoka said with a giggle as she pulled their green haired girl back into her seat." : "Nodoka said with a giggle as she pulled the green haired girl back into her seat. "

5) "It sounded a bit troupe-y to her, but not out of the question." : "It sounded a bit tropey to her, but not out of the question."

6) "She needed more time to consider things before approaching anyone to be her Magistra even to just ask their opinions on things." : "She needed more time to consider things before approaching anyone to be her Magistra or even to just ask their opinions on things."

7) "The only ones she might've considered was Haruna and by her extension, her sister." : "The only ones she might've considered was Haruna and by extension, her sister."

I'm so happy people still update ranma stories

It feels odd to read a Ranma fic where Ranma doesn’t love the art. While that leads to a tad bit of dissonance I am enjoying the story!

Ah Chisame the bulwark of normality among the Negima girls, until she does her secret cosplay net idol thing. XD As for the omake i think Eva just might be inclined to discreetly send Chisame a gift basket or something. :)

Hopedully well see more ranma and her not gf more together.

Nitpicks:

1) "...Is it because she's her favorite?..." : "...Is it because she's his favorite?..."

2) ""... Negi is the only person I've ever met of my own age who can fight with him on even terms so I consider Negi a rival."" : ""... Negi is the only person I've ever met of my own age who can fight with me on even terms so I consider Negi a rival.""

Short chapter so few nitpicks.

Last chapter was definitely strange. It felt more like an omake, especially with the massive time jumps involved that were not part of the following chapter (unless it has been at least 4 months, since then...which would mean the Magic World Arc should be finishing up now :p). Why was she made the XV (Fifteenth) though? The ghost should have been a different person for that (since he would have already have had an heir, thus it would have fallen for his heir to remain behind to train a successor). How did she go back in time? The beginning of the chapter was clearly following the end of the previous, and it involved many timeskips, but in this chapter she has the sword...many months before she was made its wielder.

And they are both wrong, unless there was a reduced tax rate applied to the earning for the 40 hour week (which would be 27,930). Rounded up, then yes, it is 28K, but for a math question, unless it was called to round, the answer would be wrong. I am impressed that Makie was able to do a long multiplication math question in her head though.

Why is she trapped in the 10 year old body? Shouldn't the curse only apply after being hit with cold water, and return her to normal with hot (you showed it working as normal earlier)?