Liar

Freaking awesome story! please update it soon!

Awesome and please write more thanks as I am enjoying the story.

Good story. One quibble, however.

Umm, this part in Chapter 28 doesn't seem to make sense in context:

"'Let's think back shall we. When Buffy died at the hands of the Master. Faith was called. Creating two Slayers and thus breaking the whole one per generation cycle. Then, a few years later, dies again. But this time, there is no Slayer called. Now, why do you think that was?'

'I don't know. I always thought that since Buffy broke the cyclical nature of a Slayer's calling that the old rules no longer applied.'

'Close. They still applied, only, all the rules were altered. Now when one Slayer dies, a Potential is activated. Usually around fifteen or sixteen years old. When Buffy died a second time, a Potential was activated. Creating a third Slayer'"

A Potential was activated would mean exactly the same thing as "a Slayer was called", just different terminology. Buffy died from Glory's portal and a new Slayer was activated; there wasn't any alteration in the rules - the old rules still applied. Only the terminology changed - what they're calling it. Only difference is there was now two Slayer lines: one running through Faith, and a second that ran through Buffy. (Prior to the mass calling)

Of course, Briar is clearly insane, so his ability to express himself accurately might be impaired a bit, but Wesley should catch that - semantics and clarity of language would be a Watcher's stock in trade if anything is.

Nice story and please update soon thank you.

Great ending to the chapter.

Excellent chapter.

Excellent story so far just windering if it will be finished or if your done with it please drop me a line at spike94768 Thanks.

Interesting part, I think I'm going to have to go back and re-read this one.

Rob

Keep it coming :-)

Hey really really great story! Please update soon! I would really like to know how it all ends.

Great Story. But you killed Connor, how could you. Poor Angel sitting waiting for him to come back safe and you kolled him. How could you. Apart from that I was enjoying your story.

Really really good fic. Did you make up the history behind the book? Cause that was really interesting.

Major Cliffy, how can yo do that to me :-).

Waiting with bated breath for the next installment.

Wayne

Ahahahahahahaha! Buffy is Evil! I love Faith-centric fics, not only for the whole Faithy-goodness but for all the Buffy bashing.

Awesome chap, looks like things are finally coming to a point. All the crypticness is adding up.

And I love the Faith/Dawn interaction. It's nice that you gave the Dark Slayer a cutesy side before you decided to blow it all up in her face.

Keep up the funness of it all.

~Ciao

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