Reviews for Godfathering |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That melted puddle on the floor is me. That was perfect. Absolutely lovely way of writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have a 17 year old too. I think you are right and that people do not give teenagers enough credit. I am sure he would be overwhelmed in Harry's situation, but I also think that, like Harry, he would really try to do his best and would be there no matter what. I loved the Harry and Ginny talk. That couple is one thing JKR definitely got right. I still hate the name Albus Severus though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have always thought that Andromeda was the HP character who suffered the most losses. She was kicked out of her family as a young adult, lost Sirius to Azkaban and then death and then lost Ted, Tonks and Remus. You did a good job showing some of that grief. |
![]() ![]() Your writing is so good. There’s little to no errors in most of it grammar wise and the story fits seemlessly with Rowlings, you’ve got talent. Please keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved what you said about adults not giving teens enough credit...it's so true! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, sweet moment when Harry held Teddy for the first time...and fed/burped him! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg I love Blvnk's work. this was so sweet and I loved it. |
![]() ![]() He ran into Fleur, but I'm pretty sure she doesn't count. Loved the chapter, can't wait till Harry brings Teddy to the Burrow to meet his family. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So sweet and earnest in a way only the best version of Harry can be. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A rich chapter... |
![]() ![]() ![]() All right...thanks for the new story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() How adorable! I love this chapter! It's so true about 17 year olds and how they kind of straddle this line between being really independent and needing help. I think you did an excellent job portraying both sides :) |
![]() ![]() Also, the title is kind of blah. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this! |
![]() ![]() I think it should have remained a one shot like this, which is good, instead of turning it into a “story”. Teddy is sweet here. |