I love that the first thing Donna does when she comes home is take off her bra and sweater. And I love that she knows that 3 quick buzzes is Josh!

"my cat died." "you don't have a cat." Hysterical!

He definitely shouldn't ask out Joey Lucas. :)

Thank you for writing! So glad that in this universe, Donna's diversion tactics backfire a bit.

"I was lucky."

Bwah! That was perfect and so them. Sweet, funny, and sarcastic. This is now my head canon for how the ep actually ended.

Awesome! I loved the balance of the funny and the sweetness :)

Brilliant, just loved it

I just loved this. You have a gift for balancing the funny with the romantic, which is one of the best qualities in a Josh & Donna fic. Even though they couldn’t wait another minute and ended up hooking up on her kitchen counter, it still didn’t lack feeling. Loved the way he expressed how he felt, and how she was honest with him too. This was excellent!

Maybe Donna's not quite as impervious as she'd like us to think? I'm looking forward to part 2!

Enjoyed your story.

Great job! I can't wait to read more! :) Joey definitely knew there was something unspoken between J/D.