Reviews for My world without you
Gabriele Kazlauskaite chapter 15 . 12/29/2019
I wonder how quickly the host club is going to find out about Hikaru and Haruhi together. The media knows now but i wonder what will happen with Kaoru though and how their mother will react to the news that Haruhi is with both of her sons, not just one.
I cant wait for the next chapter!
Flowingwiththeriver chapter 15 . 5/6/2019
I loved it! I wasnt too sure on how you were gonna do the whole 3 way relationship but I like it!
crybaby-chronicles chapter 1 . 4/7/2019
this chapter has me on the edge of my seat! i’m so pumped for chapter 16!
Fairedenale chapter 15 . 4/4/2019
I love this story. The way you write about their relationship and the ordeal and confusion, I love it. Such a great read and can't wait to see how Paris turns out for them, or what happens after the trip. Keep the great work hun. Love ya!
Always Keep the Faith chapter 15 . 2/11/2019
Love when both of them push her buttons. No innuendo intended. But now I'm thinking about it...
Your idea of a Harry Potter crossover, could be interesting.
Whispurr10 chapter 15 . 2/4/2019
yay your back! I love the new chapter!
crybaby-chronicles chapter 1 . 2/4/2019
i can not wait for chapter 15! *stressed fangirling noises*
RavynLex chapter 15 . 2/3/2019
Aww, this was cute! I love seeing the twins willingly stepping out of their comfort zone with Haruhi. She's such a part of them, they just don't think anything of letting her see them being vulnerable. Aww! They all need so many cuddles! .
RavingRebel221 chapter 14 . 1/28/2019
Hope whatever is stressing you doesn't last very long! Just wanted to wish you a moment of unadulterated joy this week, and thanks for the story!
Kabunn chapter 13 . 1/27/2019
This is really great please keep going!
TomParisLvr chapter 13 . 1/1/2019
YES! They’re all together! I’m so happy! Also, the memories of her dad were so sweet! Thanks for updating.
TomParisLvr chapter 11 . 12/26/2018
I enjoyed this chapter. I love how Hikaru wanted to make sure Haruhi was completely comfortable before going any further. I also like how he was the one who said they all needed to talk. He seems to be maturing. I can’t wait to see how the talk goes!
TomParisLvr chapter 9 . 12/18/2018
I don’t think this chapter was lame. I liked it. In fact, I like the whole story! I hope Haruhi ends up with both of them because I totally ship the three of them! Either way, I’m looking forward to the next chapter
Whispurr10 chapter 8 . 12/14/2018
This is awesome I can’t wait to see where it goes
RavynLex chapter 3 . 12/11/2018
Ugh, poor little Haru. It's good that she managed to ask before she could change her mind. Of course mama Hitachiin wants her to stay! Doesn't matter if their relationship stays platonic or goes romantic, those three are a unit, of course they're going to stay with her!

May I offer a teensy bit of constructive criticism? In chapter 2, you have an area where you keep switching POV in what seems to be an accidental way. Haruhi's "I" statements keep getting turned into third-person "she" statements. I'm not complaining, 'cause gods know I've been there myself! Just letting you know, in case you didn't catch it. (I know I go back way later and catch things in my own work, lol)

I can't wait to see where you take Haru and the lads. Keep it up!