| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Revival of Soul Magic |
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   BadBoy1992 chapter 16 . 7/19 Hm, maybe its Saber-toothed tiger. |
| LancealotRM chapter 5 . 7/18 Uh I did Hermione just trip over a rock in a Hogwarts hallway? Why is there a rock there? |
| Fyr RedNight chapter 27 . 7/14 This story is awesome. The epicness level is over 9000! I very much look forward to read more! |
| BROMBROS chapter 27 . 7/13 Well I enjoyed this chapter. I will only point out that when you have Minerva shout "Get the students out of here," you have as he conjured her Patronus. That you are missing an "s" for she. |
| BROMBROS chapter 26 . 7/13 Does Alistair now have a portion of Voldemort in him? |
| pavook chapter 2 . 7/4 5 girls? No Astoria? I'm all for them being a great soul bonded 6, but it's not really significant magical number as is 7. But if it's something to shake up magical traditions, Harry Potter is the one to go. Let him be the glorious spearhead that will make the 6 great magical number. :D |
| stacyleedam25 chapter 27 . 6/10 Please update this story is so good and can't wait to see what happens next |
| idstealer000 chapter 23 . 6/6 Hello, enjoying the story so far. Overall this is a fine tale, now a couple of questions 1: If they don’t want everyone to know that there are more soul mages, why do they tell everyone and their mother? 2: Was the thing with Lily and Isabel and what they did to Lockhart necessary? Because it just seems to me that it’s a little psychotic and would the law (even as backwards as magical law is) put up with it? |
| Ada1229 chapter 8 . 5/29 "Would you kindly...?" "Why do I hate those words?" Harry huffed "Because it's a Bioshock reference that implies you're being mind controlled on a genetic level Harry" Ada1229 said to him |
| Absol89 chapter 27 . 5/22 Your writing is super and the idea is a good one however you have made your own story so complicated that it gets impossible to follow and just makes you roll your eyes. As I say it is a good idea but what you really need to do is slow down and simplify the story. |
| Grammar Doctor chapter 4 . 5/14 Please, please fix your pronouns! Instead of "Me and James had met him", you should have "James and I met him"." (You could say "I and James met him" and it wouldn't violate grammar, but it would violate one of the 'hidden' rules of English usage, and mark you as a non-native speaker.) BTW, most people can 'hear' the correct pronoun by saying the sentence aloud, but WITHOUT the additional subject, as:"Me/I met him". Many people can 'hear' that "Me met him" is incorrrect. |
| vorcanlefay chapter 7 . 5/15 Why is Harry the weakest one? he is supposed to be a heir of soul magic, and has the strongest since he is a baby. why is he so weak when it comes to soul magic and everyone else passes him by easily. why is it that they have been training for 6 years and random people who know nothing about soul magic can catch up so quickly? |
| Rokai666 chapter 5 . 4/22 Why is this making me think of the clacker volley from JoJo? the idea of a little girl like Astoria useing the clacker volleyboomerang just to torment death eaters is hilarious. |
| evelyn cullen potter chapter 27 . 4/22 me encanta tu historia por favor continua |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/10 NO Ginny! I can't stand her!? |
