Awesome story, I loved it.

Dani

This was AMAZING!

Great job! A fun and “rompy” read!

Well done, Jack, you've knocked yourself out...literally. Ouch.

ah I'm enjoying this all too much haha you got Jack's voice just right, which pretty hard to do.

This was so good, I really enjoyed it!

This was a really good read, a nice refreshing break from reality! I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Great job :)

This was so so good! The detail you put into your work does wonders for the mind! You don’t overuse words and you don’t make anything seem or sound vulgar and that’s really important. Great job so far.

Norrington is just an innocent bystander really, Elizabeth’s heart belongs somewhere else and that kinda sucks. Love where this is going still, you write lemon’s beautifully

Things will work out for them! As long as Jack doesn’t hang, all is well. But I don’t think Norrington is going to want an Elizabeth in love with a Sparrow!

That’s kind of how I pictured them doing it for the first time. Desperate and just raw hunger. Absolutely love it. Also love the fun twist with the island! It’s very different, great job

So hot! I was needing this today, hormones and whatnot hahaha. I really like that you incorporated that Elizabeth knows nothing about sex, makes it more fun :)

The story plot mixed with the saucy romance is SO GOOD. It’s perfect when you make build. Wonderfully written too, ugh this is such a good read!

Ugh the chemistry and timing for all of this is perfect! I absolutely adore what’s happening. Great job

I love that this is in the perspective of Jack. Most of the time it’s the other way around and it’s nice to be in his head ;)