Holy shit man, this story shifted tones so fast. I think you gave me whiplash. This has gotten really, really good.

I loved the story it made me cry more times than i can count on both hands. the plot is great and flows pretty good. wish you had more of MHA fanfics!

This is a hidden gem i didn't know i needed, bravo

I loved this story, thank you :V

What did Jiro transition from? Was she born a man, or a woman?

I'm surprised this story, a complete story might I add, has so little traffic.

It's much better plotted than so many others out there, didn't get tangled up with canon plot as fan fictions tend to be, and gave life to characters that desperately needed them.

It has its issues, of course, but it seems that the author is well aware of them already.

That said, I really enjoyed reading this, and am really glad you put in over two years of dedication to finish what you started.

this story was so god demned intriguing, tho i recommend to start reading early in the morning, or u will not finish the bk, and u will end up like me, reading till 4 in the morning

Woah. Reading this at 3:00 am was such a bad idea. The intensity and emotional baggage this hits you with is like a huge dose of cocaine. This has to be one of the best BNHA AUs that I've ever read.

I see the Dragon Ball z Abridged in here. You can not hide it from me

Dude... This has been one of the most amazing, emotional, surprising story I've ever read. It also the only story, book, anything to ever make cry. So ... good job. BTW for you all you guys who cant take two guys kissing or the main love interest being trans, you're just a joke. I mean I completely fine with it, and so should everyine else. Keep up the good work author even if your putting the pronoun after the verb is annoying this is still a really really good story

Well that was definitely intense. The level of detail and passion were incredible, and the writing was top notch as always.

I have 2 minor critiques, those being that the point where it switched from descriptive to vague in the middle was a little distracting, and the early banter was a bit similar between the two, and a bit tricky to differentiate, aside from the Izuku stutters.

But that was only cus I was looking for things. The actual writing was still incredible and titillating

I was kinda expecting an ooc izuku the whole nervous izuku thing is overused ik it's canon but you gotta change it up man

Another amazing chapter. The scenes with overhaul were all great in a way I was a little worried they might not be after all for one, and the dramatic scenes with Stendhal were all incredible. The izujiro at the end was incredibly well written, and looking forward to see where it goes

My one complaint is that this is the one time the musical cut ins have felt a bit overdone and distracting to me. It hit the beats a soundtrack would if this were animated, but for a text story the lines were just a bit too frequent and slowed the action a tad.

Bravo

I'M NOT CRYING YOU'RE CRYING!

But seriously, holy shit. I haven't cried over a fanfic like this since I read 'Secret of Frost and Moon'.

Damnit. I hate you.

Well done.