interesting premise, nice work!

You are good, very detailed, very precise

Great presentation for the first chapter! Thank you :D

Ahh, I like this. Though, the usage of the anime scene with Berserker instead of the Light Novel is a tad disconcerting.

wish you would of wrote more for this it's so good

Really wish there was more of this...

I'm always down for a good Ilya fic! I did notice one thing: The reason Shirou's tracing is a thing is because he was doing it wrong the entire time. Kiritsugu was a terrible teacher, but he would be able to notice that Shirou was not doing it right. Most people ignore this, so its fine if you don't address it. I just like pointing it out.

good stuff, keep up the good work

So, I liked the pie, could I have another slice please?

Always nice to see a fic-especially if it’s well written like this one-covering shirou and illya’s relationship, whether it’s romantic or familial.
And I mean come on! Those two are a power duo! A mage with near unlimited Prana and a scary ass servant, and her brother who has one of the most unique abilities in the world and was trained by a wildly successful hitman.
Watch out, world.

Right, premonitions... That isn't a jab to another story i hope.

Although this story seems interesting I can’t help but worry after I noticed none of your stories have been completed and some haven’t been updated in years

So instead of a Hero Complex, Shirou has a major sister complex? So does that mean if anyone threatens Illya, Shirou is gonna snap their neck or something?

This is great, I've been looking for this kind of Shirou in a lot of fanfiction. I think you nail it because Shirou who will fight the whole world for Illya's hapiness are the best kind of Shirou.
Please keep up the good work and more update please.

Hype for this to continue. I can already tell it's gonna be a blast to read.