this generally could be a good, fun fic, but your Naruto is far too much an idiot. All the bizarre shit he's gone through from birth, like having a giant chakra monster in his stomach all his life, and he acts like EVERY NEW REVELATION in this new world is the wierdest thing he's ever seen!

Sorry, I'll have to pass.

Ya no nerfing him to hell is dumb atleast let him have he's Chakra to when he was a genin that's a good starting foundation now he's just a little weak human with the gamer and we know he ain't gonna use in a smart way this is Naruto after all

Up bro

I knew I would get to him someday!

YES!YES!YES!YES!YES!

Whats with the holdup? Man I love this story please!continue.

I think it would be a much better story if he didn’t lose all of his chakra and seemingly all of his physical ability too because in the Shinobi world their bodies are weird and can simply be trained to absurd levels that has very little to do with chakra and he may not be a lee but he was no slouch either

Well, that is one freaking stupid fanfic. Nothing makes sense, it's a crossover only in name.

I saw Dio in that lineup! WRYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! Anyways great story more please.

This is so fun. Nice story, demn nearly blow my stomach. Please continue this story

fasa mais

Complete reset of abilities and a talking system? Both very shitty ideas

Was worried that it weird feel rushed but is really good

I can't wait to see what happens next

THIS IS HILARIOUS! I really hope you keep on updating! And does the window with Seven Hokage faces mean that this Naruto is a fragment, while the “real” Naruto stayed in the Hidden Leaf? I can’t wait wait to find it! And you’re too hard on yourself, your fight scene wasn’t bad at all, it was better than most other stories; you could tell what was going on and it didn’t go on for too long. Anyways, keep up the good work!