What an astounding story! Really interesting!

heyo, writer! your story is amazing, and i would love to see more. the plot is spot on, Wily is accurate and the whole idea is just... brilliant. i'm kinda running out of nice words to say here sorry! i just wanted to say that i wish i could write as flawlessly as you :P

I really enjoy this story and where it's going so far! I especially like the fact that Blues is allowed to explore his creative curious side, and Aki is a really good link to that growth.

A suggestion about names: usually when someone has a title (like Doctor, Sergeant, Captain, etc.), when they are first introduced it's ok to introduce them by their title and full name, but any mention after first introductions is usually just with the title and last name (for example, "Sergeant Night glared..."). Also, it's not usually proper to refer to a person by their first name and last name, so to refer to someone without using their title, either use only their first name or only their last name (for example, "Night glared..." or "Breaker glared..."). For more formal situations, last name is more proper, and in casual settings, first name is acceptable, but last name can also be used.

Also, for alias, are you referring to the whole Breaker Night/Lord Obsidian character? If so, Breaker Night is his real name with Sergeant as his real title, and Lord Obsidian is his alias.

I hope I was able to be of some help to you, and I really look forward to more story!

heyyy you nailed it again. this story is just so goddamn amazing dude! keep up writing, i really cant wait for the next chapter !

Yeah, I'm calling shenanigans here. There's no way a kid could get away with angrily stomping on glasses in a public store, regardless of whether or not the cameras catch them (you know, since folks have eyes and ears to catch this sort of thing). You could get jailed up to a year with a fine up to $500 just for shoplifting, do you really think breaking an unpaid-for product in broad daylight wouldn't make any waves?

Also, alias? I'm pretty sure that's his real name (It's a triple wordplay; Night rhymes with Light, he's similar to Break Man and Knight Man, and Sergeant Breaker is phonetically similar to "Circuit Breaker"). I don't really mind which combination you use though, whether it's Sergeant, Sergeant Night, Breaker Night, etc.

It was kinda neat seeing Blues bond with Aki, though.

c

ohhhh god i waited and waited for the continuation! your writing style is amazing and the plot is just uuuuh kinda perfect?
keep writing, it's a masterpiece already

Looks like Blues is on board with Wily’s plans. Wonder how well this will go?

Oy, who could just junk an innocent toaster bot like that!? That's a crime against nature right there!...

I wonder what those minor tweaks are? Can’t wait to see which robots he builds next. Is going to go along his original way or do something different?

Im confused on what Blues looks like so right now im picturing Fake Man.

Called it! Nice to see Blues even if it isn’t him. I wonder how Wily plans on hiding Blues? I doubt Blues would like being couped up in Wily’s room. Besides, then Wily would have to keep anyone from entering his room and good luck with that when everyone thinks you’re 5 years old. Can’t wait to see what happens next!

Aww Wily is starting to really care about Bert. Also he's making a "friend". Now Blues is coming to the story. I was wondering if your going to add your own head canons to the universe? The show isn't really providing much.

Don't get me wrong, but I don't exactly see much wrong with a mom wanting to her kid with "autism" to be put in regular classes. I mean, there's this one story a mom who wanted her twin sons (both autistic) to go to regular classes, and they eventually adapted over time, one being a pretty good violinist, the other a pretty good athlete.
The problem comes into play when the story hasn't clarified whether Wily has low-functioning autism, or high-functioning autism. Either his "mom" is trying to give Wily his best shot in life despite his disadvantages if it's the former (which would be incongruous with what's been shown so far), or she's deliberately stunting his potential if it's the latter.

This is surprisingly interesting. I am hoping to see Blues/Break Man wreak havoc, and generally decimate his enemies. It would also be amusing to see wily recreate roboenza.