Reviews for A Confluence of Stars
just hella bored chapter 21 . 8/23
Haah, this was lovely, new characters new relations and all lovely stories in between. It helped a bit with my own world building that i have been doing in my head and its really fascinating how everyone fit their roles perfectly and how it rrally makes sense I like your story and it would be nice to read more ..
just hella bored chapter 15 . 8/21
Painnim reminded me of Loki.
just hella bored chapter 9 . 8/21
This story is really lovely and its new and its helping me make my own world and piece in the missing pieces and how everything actually seem to make sense and just... its lovely absolutely lovely
wakanda4ever chapter 1 . 12/24/2019
are you african coz I am the word baba is shona which means father
zemblenity chapter 21 . 11/22/2019
I’ve never really imagined this triad before but you really make it work! I’ve enjoyed this story a lot, it’s beautifully written and kept me on the edge of my seat. I’d love to see omakes about their adventures if you ever get to it. Great work on this story!
zemblenity chapter 19 . 11/22/2019
Awww Choji and Yugito professing their love for Sakura is cute as hell!
zemblenity chapter 14 . 11/22/2019
I really liked Yugito’s chapter! It’s cute that she sees Sakura like this! I also love Choji, that teddy bear!
Danniegirl1022 chapter 21 . 11/11/2019
All of your stories have moved me through the years but none have shook me as much as this one. This is by far one your most beautiful stories ever. I hope you write the little adventures they do together. Keep doing your magic.
Lynnai chapter 21 . 9/22/2019
I've not had the time to read your story for a few months but finally managed to find the time to catch up.

Beautifully written and while the more hectic scenes spatially confuse me at times I still enjoyed it very much.

The ending confused the heck out of me though. Left me feeling like we were suddenly dealing with a multiverse Sakura. Like Elisabeth from BioShock 3. Not a clue what's actually going on.

Either way. As always. The time and effort you put into this is much appreciated.
StarMachine chapter 21 . 9/16/2019
Bitch I don't know how you do it but you just keep pumping out killer stories after killer stories. You always complete them and they are always amazing. This one in particular really stood out to me, I love how you made Choji into a main love interest and you made him so charming and delightful when he is so often overlooked as a shadow of Shikamaru in other stories. And I love how you gave depth to every minor character and they have lives and relations with each other outside of Sakura and they stand in conflict with her beliefs but aren't mindlessly malicious. This was such a joy to read thanks so much for giving us another good one.
Guest chapter 21 . 9/16/2019
I really don't understand the ending, can you clarify it please
Hana-Taisho chapter 21 . 9/5/2019
Wow. This was a surprising ending! I had thought we would get to meet Choji's family or get one more quest with the three of them. I wondered who the wolf was and just thought it was either Kakashi, but then the dark fur made me think of Obito.
Thank you for always making these beautiful stories and always making my day.
Thank you so much for Being an artist!
CCXC chapter 21 . 8/28/2019
Hi! Loved the story so much, you are so creative and youre writing is somehow better than all that. You make magic in words.

Could you please explain to me the last to scenes? Its 2:30 am after 12 hour shift at work and Im dead but finishing this was worth it.

Thank you, XO!
mashiro.x.shiina chapter 21 . 8/19/2019
Such a unique and well fleshed out story. Definitely one of your best! Thanks for sharing!
Alechaos Ogigio 2 chapter 21 . 8/19/2019
never read the original but this story was amazing.
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