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sadness just pure sadness someone please pick this up!

Eh it's fine really. It's pretty common for someone to start a story and quickly become unmotivated. I get the feeling. The thing is, some people start a story they think is going to be amazing and will last a long time, but overtime they start becoming more and more disinterested until they just stop, I've done this like 6 or 7 times, so far I only have one story I've wrote a decent portion of that I don't think I'll stop for a while now (A Reset Gone Wrong if you're wondering), if ya want to make a story that'll last for a while, you just gotta keep writing them until you hit the jackpot, try improving in each story by looking at your past stories, and trying to make the new one better.

OOC is when a character isn't written like their normal personality, and without a reason for it. So OOC would be if gaara made a bunch witty remarks (something very unlike him) without anything happening to cause that. OC just means Original Character.

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Although, I personally would prefer it if the pairings aren’t decided so early on. Create the drama, set up the tension, make it as if Naruto is going to end up with either girl but never confirm it yet. Readers like that kind of stuff in where the girl (or guy, depending on the Main Character) isn’t set in stone. And even when Naruto does end up in a relationship with someone, make it be temporary and have them break it off painfully so that the true girl would be able to console him.

Or, in my own personal preference, have the one Naruto broke up with BE the main girl and have her watch Naruto be happy with another girl. Show us her distress, her guilt, her suffering, her despair; show us her thoughts that she WANTS to get Naruto back, but she’s struggling to know how she should go about that.

Let there be drama, tears and harsh words you can never take back. Don’t make it a perfect relationship. Let them bend, let them break, let them crumble... so that when they rebuild it, it will be stronger than ever.

Basically, lots of drama, yet not TOO overdramatic.

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Sorry if I look like I’m imposing. This is nothing more than a suggestion and you should not take it as anything more than that. Don’t let my words dissuade you on how YOU should write because your own happiness is what matters. Write something that you can also enjoy, not just other people.

Anyway, hope to read more!

DAMN IT! I found this story too late! Am I unable to vote for other possible girls now? I like Pyrrha, don’t get me wrong, but I prefer her more to be with Jaune, to be honest.

Doesn’t mean I will stop reading, though! I really like your story! It’s making me feel a certain kind of rush that I only get at finding interesting reads.

Anyway, I originally wanted to vote for Weiss, but based on how the story will be centered (unless the perspectives change), I don’t think it’s going to happen. I just really like thinking of the dynamic of Naruto trying his best to get rid of Weiss’ stuck-up attitude by annoying the hell out of her and Weiss in turn tries to teach him some manners and the like, and maybe failing (or succeeding?) at it.

Well, guess I’m going for Ruby! Since I’m a big fan of Ice Flower, the cute little Rose will probably be an adorable pair for Naruto. Maybe Ruby can unintentionally help Naruto cope (being out of time and all) by showing him a familiar sight of her having similar traits to a certain Hyūga (since that’s where I think the Silver-Eyed warriors came from)

Very nice story. Well written. Keep up the good work.

Oh so there is a reason why Chakra just disappeared, I was hoping there was an explanation and it didn't just happen for plot, even if the explanation isn't great I'm glad there is one. Btw how is Naruto able to carry Pyrrha bridal style when he has 1 arm? You've also said "hands" multiple times when referring to him so unless I'm forgetting something or missed something I think you forgot that he has one arm.

Man, why do readers like unoriginality, I say that because of the pairings people want, fortunately there isn't much Yang, but Blake...I don't think I've ever seen her given a pairing with a character outside of the RWBY verse in a crossover fic so far, let alone Naruto, Cinder and Emerald are also pretty rare. Instead people vote for Pyrrha, Ruby, and Neo. Ruby is somewhat overused as well, but not as much as Pyrrha out of most stories, Neo is the most original out of the 3, but I don't like the pairing itself.

You already decided on Pyrrha? I mean, it's fine, I can accept it not being who I want, but I felt like it was a little early to decide, just 2 chapters in and the main character is already destined to be paired with someone. I can also accept Naruto losing his Chakra and Kurama dying, even though I would've rather preferred Kurama simply staying but not having any power, mainly so he can guide Naruto in some cases, or make witty banter, something like that, anyways it's fine. I also feel like some of this was a little rushed, especially him meeting Ozpin and Ruby so quickly, but it's not the worst I've seen. I'll keep reading now, the story is decent so far, but I'm hoping it can improve after this point.

I'd want NarutoXRuby or Blake. Yang is so fucking overused it's not even funny, Pyrrha is also somewhat overused. And, while it is interesting idea to pair him with Cinder, Emerald, and Neo, it doesn't make sense either. Naruto would NEVER, and I mean NEVER, work with them, let alone form THAT kind of relationship with them, I'm fine with a characters personality being changed slightly to affect the story in a positive way, but, while Naruto would likely suffer some form of depression for entering what he thinks is a new world, he wouldn't just become evil or something. I also have never seen NarutoXBlake before and would like to see it here.

good luck! I loved the chap btw that was a neat twist with Oz and I enjoyed it!

I see nothing wrong with Naruto's character here. As long as he values life, his friends happiness and works toward peace, you can't really go wrong if getting that right is important for you and the story you want. I like the story so far, can't wait to get to some of the action.

Night good luck for your exam

Please continue this story.