So mitsukis full on abusive in this? and what 4 year old considers physical trainig, !st along actually does it?

The emotional scenes are honestly really good. IMO chapters 3-5 don’t need an update and I’m ecstatic at the thought of another actually chapter! Good job so far.

This is an interesting story idea and I like it. Now I will say about with izuku quirk. He can change the shape of the rain so to say if he changed it to thin and Sharp he could cut things. Maybe puncture. Things. But that is just an idea fore me. Or may be he could make it a bit more acidic by consuming more acidic thing. Like to the point where the slime that hit bakugou face will happen to where ever the rain hits. But those. Are just some thoughts for you. I look forward to reading more till the next one.

dear BobShizaz
I am strongly displeasd that you think that you are bad at the happy emotinal stuff. Through-out this entire story i was hooked by the emotions of the characters and the way that Izuku tryed to help kachan

P.s: please make bakugo call Izuku deku at one point but in a nice way

-tHEaNNOYINYcATT

One thing is that glycerin is not explosive so really the only think Mitsuki can do with it is a passive moisturizer also fun fact glycerin is used to make nitroglycerin

okay

The other chapters seem fine to me. Keep it up

I’ve read a lot of fanfiction before this one, so just let me know if you need any help!

gudluck on ur break! I hope you post your next chapter soon. honesty I think how you write is good enough but I aint gonna stop you if you wanna improve.

hope you post soon

nice

This is fanfic is the one I’ve been excited for the most! I love the friendship/rivalry between Bakugo and Izuku. I think it’s great how they push each other to succeed and help each other when needed. I just can’t wait for the story to get to the parts in the canon! Either way if he get OFA or not it’ll be a very interesting and fun read to stick along with.

I'm just a reader who fell in love with your story and the advice I can give you for romance is reading any decent MidoTsuyu fanfic and for action try reading a Viridescent it's the #1 ranked bnha/mha and the fighting scenes can get really intense

Good luck on your rewrite! While I don't know how to give criticism, I just wanted to say that we'll be eagerly waiting for your return!

You're not bad at writing fanfic you just have to describe things better. You have a good base as a plot. If you're not sure, start all over ~ ah ps for pairing i have an advice, please make IzukuxHimiko Toga i love this pair,for Katsuki do KatsukixMomo

I understand