| Reviews for I Love My Younger Half-Sister |
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Major Mike Powell III chapter 2 . 9/30/2019 Well, well, Li'l Lily~ Hoo-rrah! 1st Review, Btches~! Ohhh Kokoro~ Kokoro~ *O* She's such a strong, strong young woman~! She's no helpless gazelle! She's not just another conquest, another piece of meat for Nyo-sama-sensei to feast upon! *O* My goodness, Nyo-sama, man~ Wow~ She's a huntress! She's a predator! Ohhh such an effect she has upon Kokoro...a negative effect, which only further drives the young geisha-in-training into the embrace and love of her beloved Helena-onee-sama~ *O* My goodness, so, so, so wonderful~ Kokoro's love and heart and Kokoro herself are strong! She will *not* fall to the relentless charms of Nyo-sama~! Mmhmm! *O* This was wonder~ful, Yuri-chan~ Great work! Welcome back! ;3 Update ASAP! That's an order! Semper-Fi! Carry on! |
Major Mike Powell III chapter 1 . 12/7/2018 Well, well, Li'l Lily~ HOO-RRAH! 1st Review EVAR, Btches~! Haaah~ Ahhh, Yuri-chan~ Oh Yuri-chan~ Each and every single ounce of effort and love you put into this story is nearly tangible. :3 You poured so much effort into this first chapter and it's clear as day~! This was so precious~ Kokoro, Helena, and the sinful, oh so beautifully sinful love that the French aristocrat has for her precious half-sister...oh my goodness~ The bittersweetness of Helena's feelings, the stress, confusion, anger, regret and then, bliss that she goes through in this first chapter...wow~ *O* And ahhh, Kokoro~ Kokoro, oh Kokoro~ She was so~cute, so~precious~! *W* The way you write her is absolutely wonderful! She's such a sweetie beauty patootie~ X3 And dat ending...ooohhh dat ending~ That's something Jojo-san himself would really~appreciate! ;D This is gonna be amazing~! Mission Start! Semper-Fi! Carry on! |