great job! This is amazing! I loved very word!

pls tell me jared suffers soon

Aaaaw and so ends another great story, this was one hell of an adventure. I'm glad everything got wrapped up positively in the end. The finale actually feels super earned here. I'm also glad that you didn't write them in like some time skip in the end where they're already a couple. This ending works best because we already know from your other works that they are a couple. This ending gives us the emotion of how it was like when they first officially asked each other out after all the trials and errors they both went through, especially Rhoda. It's super sweet!

The easter eggs and notes are a nice add on, it shows the readers how much thought process is put into these stories. A lot of people don't check their facts when writing so a lot of events don't work for their stories. Writing requires a lot of effort if you want it to read well.

To sum up my review, this story was great and it was fun keeping up with it :)

Well that was really useful information but honestly I was hoping it was another chapter to the story. Still good to know these things thanks for sharing

You should have someone make a short animation of this. That would be awesome!

YEEES IT TAKES TWO TO TANGO BITCH HAHAAA! Rhoda said stop fucking with me ‘cause I get more coin than you so I know damn well I’m the favorite XD!

The part with Hermina was upsetting. In a way I was like “Why would you believe Jared over your best friend who you know would never speak ill of anyone unless they deserved it (and even that is a rarity)” but I also understand that Hermina can be hot headed, especially when she feels like shes being attacked she goes fully in defense mode and doesn’t think things through when she’s heated. It just made me wonder cause like she isnt affected by Jareds charms, but then again she did say he was changing Rhoda so that may have skewed her view of her. Okay it’s all making sense now after typing it out XD

Daaang we’re about to reach the finish line. I’m so ready for the finale bruh this story was so good and was a fun journey to ride. I’m so hyped to read what you got in store for the end :)

Really good chapter can't believe mina would believe anything Jared said, still Rhoda finally stood up to chapter update soon

Omg! It's like I want them to be together but at the same time I know if they rush and be together the story will come to a end! .
I don't want it to end!

Yeees it feels like a sigh of relief that someone at least helped her get to her senses more. And that she was able to share her problems with someone and no longer have to bottle them all up. No longer have to pretend that everything's okay. Bring it on Jared, Rhoda is getting her groove back and we're all cheering for her! Thanks for the update fam I hope you're doing well and I can't wait for the next chapter :D!

Well glad Jesse helped Rhoda see that Jared was using her. Too bad Jesse won't be there during the ball. Maybe some of Rhoda's friends could be though. Hopefully Rhoda will be careful please update soon

NOOOOOOOOOO MY COCK GOT BLOCKED WITH THAT ENDING YOU SADIST LMFAO THE MOMENT I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR IS FINALLY COMING, THE MOMENT WHEN SHE TELLS HIM EVERYTHING YEEESS!

Bruh her lil drunk trip she had was written sooo good! Like the metaphors were written so well that it didn't come off as like cheesy or anything like that. And Rhoda coming through the phone line is fucking genius xD

You always manage to upload a chapter when my day is shitty, this literally gave me ...life lol I'm so hyped to read what happens next dude you're killing this story! :D

well that was a pretty good chapter. seems rhoda really is confused on how things truly are, yet i think she is slowly working things out. wonder what jesse will learn about her story? please update soon

NOOOO RHODA COME BACK, WE LOVE YOU! T_T

Have you ever heard the song Because of You by Kelly Clarkson? Rhoda is literally that song right now towards Jared like xD omg I'm ashamed to say I cheered Jesse on when he showed Jared up and called her honey afterwards I was like "omg I missed this" lol

I had a really really shitty weekend. Like one of the worst I've had in years. This chapter helped me distract for a while, I genuinely thank you for it even though it wasn't really your intention for uploading a new chapter lol I'm so eager to read what comes next 'cause it could literally be anything happening at this point. Hope your week has been good fam :)

Man I really wanted Rhoda to tell Jared off but she's not quite there yet. Jesse hopefully realizes he is in love with Rhoda and they can finally be happy. As for Jared wonder what he'll do or say about Jesse after seeing that kiss

Hmmm it's interesting that Coco and Penny were the ones to inform Jesse. I'm shocked no one else has tried that. It makes sense, children are always open and have good instincts when it comes to good or bad people :)

Now we're starting to slowly go get somewhere. Jesse isn't fully on bored the "angry mob hunt for Jared" train yet but he's starting to get observant now after what the kids told him. I'm so ready for when Jesse find out the truth.

Jared is a total child. He even whines like one he sounds so selfish. You did an excellent job in writing his dialogue and making you dislike him. That's some good shit lol He's gunna come up with some new scandal that'll throw Rhoda under the bus again huh? Well y'know what that's okay, 'CAUSE SHES GOT A DOG THAT CAN LEARN ATTACK IF SHE REALLY WANTED HIM TO! OOOOh I'm so ready for Jared to get his shit rocked. xD These two back to back updates were candy to me but I shall be patient for the next update 'cause I know yo life busy bruh. You wrote another great story and DonutsforLife did a good job at editing too. What smarter way to write her characters in your story than having the actual creator help you write them! :D