OMG, it's like you helped write/influenced the 2 hr movie. This is so beautifully done, and you hit on something I was thinking - Wyatt telling Lucy he loved her - missing in the movie. Yes, understood but I would have loved to hear it from both of them. Thank you and you are very very talented

This was so good! You should seriously right more. Don’t let others discourage you and don’t be scared to put your work out there.

I wish we'd gotten an actual exchange of ILYs from each of them, like this.

I loved it! Never give up

Wow! Please don't cut yourself short! You are a very, very good writer! This was fantastic! I'm not sure how the photo is going to play out in screen but I can only hope your version is close! Nicely done and I can't wait to read more from you!

Wow, I am in love with this. I was wishing someone would write something about this scene (partly because I was a little too busy to do so, lol) and I'm so glad you did, because you did it SO well (as always). Thank you, and looking forward to more from you soon! :) (btw, LOVE your mom's reactions on Twitter about the show, they kill me every time hahahaha)

I've been avoiding spoilers but I’m glad I read this. It was one lovely version of what I hope will happen with our soldier and historian.

Don't you dare say you're not talented! I look forward to your fics, you're one of my favorite authors. Keep them coming! You keep my Lyatt heart fulfilled!

I loved it! I loved how they came together!
Want to do another of them based on the promo pic of them holding hands in the bunker looking at the time machine at Christmas time? Maybe a continuation of this story to that pic. J/k your a wonderful writer though.

I love this Story. It's so intense but romantic.
And we have our ILYs :-)

Not talented? Excuse me I beg to differ. This is a beautiful little fic. You captured the desperation and sadness of that moment combined with the pure fire that is Lyatt. I feel like you have given a very believable version of events. Cuddling to stay warm might be a cliche but from spoilers it sounds like it might happen. And I can see Lucy making the decision to forgive him much sooner based on info in the journal and from her future self. I can’t wait till you tackle those other gorgeous pics.

Yes! Please keep writing (and posting)! You are a wonderful writer who gives us the Lyatt content we crave and delivers it masterfully and eloquently in a way that makes me feel truly immersed in the story and characters. You are one of a handful of fanfic writers that I love to reread all of your fics when I am (not so patienntly) waiting for new Lyatt content to pop up. This was a great one-shot and I will be waiting, not so patiently ;) for more Beyond.

UM... this was AMAZING! Loved how you weaved the spark/embers/flame through the whole story! Especially loved ‘she swore she could start a fire with the love she felt for him. The spark between them never something that went out, instead it stood simmering below the surface just waiting to ignite again.’ Gah! I was thinking ahead as I read this and then I read your words and they went where I wanted them to go, it felt like you were in my head. Very cool.
I mean I loved all of it, but it’d be weird if I copied and pasted your whole story in this review box to tell you that ‘this is my favourite part’. But if it wasn’t weird, I would do that.
I’m staying away from anything released while filming so it will be a complete surprise, so I don’t know what the photo looks like that inspired this fic, but it was still an awesome read! You’re a good writer, I was quite tense until Wyatt came back inside. Really well written. Thanks for posting.

Great stuff...enjoyed reading it!

Wait, what? What do you mean you’re not talented?! That was lovely - descriptive and active and introspective. Nice work!