| Reviews for The Last Summoner |
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BlackoutSampler chapter 8 . 6/24 Oh, do I enjoy this! Yuna is such a interesting perspective on things, and subtly tying the bits about FFX being set in the past of FF7 is great. Paring Sephiroth and Yuna sounds like an odd choice, given her previous love interest(s) but I'm curious enough to stick around for it. I find Yuna's repeated unfamiliarity with 'machina' a little strange though. By this point in the story, she's already rode the Highwind, and went through Beville's temple. So having her question the helicopter was a little odd, Especially since the Highwind has practically no visible form of thrust itself. But not only that, several other points in time she's seen tech in Spira do similar or better than FF7 tech, Like how Luca has a literal sports bar with working TV implying broadcasting sports isn't uncommon, which checks out later when you can find the TV crew NPCs. I don't expect her to fit right in, but it just feels like she's leaning a little to far in Luddite territory. And on a separate note, I wonder if any of the other Optional Aeons made it to Gaia? I kinda want to see the duel between Sephiroth and a Yojimbo funded by a small loan of a million gil. Who's Katana of Weebitude has been folded more? Yamato or Masamune? or if the Magus Sisters have any relation to Minerva. |
MockingJay344 chapter 8 . 6/16 This story is amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter and i'm also excited to see Yuna and Aerith meet! |
craftscute09 chapter 8 . 5/4 Love it! I think it deserves more views and faves hehe...Hope you’re ok! thank you for posting and looking forward to more |
SakuraRozen chapter 8 . 4/14 Por dios, que buena historia ojalá la continúes pronto |
actionliker chapter 6 . 4/14 It's been many months since you last updated...I want to ask you, are you all right out there? With the devastating Covid-19 virus devastating the world right now, I'm worried you might've been one of the many claimed by this pandemic. Please give us a shout out that you are fine and well. |
Ellie chapter 8 . 4/10 I love this story so much! I think the way you tie FFVII and FFX is really unique and easy to understand. I've always thought about the links between the two, but to see it written here in a manner that's sophisticated and true to characters, I appreciate it so much. I hope you continue this story! |
Coldvoid chapter 8 . 3/7 Binged it. Looks promising, hope u update soon :) |
Zane Tribal Tyne Alexandros chapter 8 . 1/30 I’m not so sure Jenova would be able to posses Seph, The only reason why he spiraled into madness in cannon is because the betrayal of his friends and grief. He might be able to resist he and kick her out of his head, be all “f**k-off mom, you aint the boss of me!”. I can even see the Puppy in the background shouting something similar while cheering Seph on with his friends as he fights for control. |
Zane Tribal Tyne Alexandros chapter 7 . 1/30 Hojo is gonna be like that annoying jewish mother... pestering his son and daughter-in law for grandkids(Specimens). |
Zane Tribal Tyne Alexandros chapter 6 . 1/30 Hmmm... so is Yuna gonna slowly turn Seph into a Anti-Antichrist? Will they be going against his mom latter on as they try to save the planet? Also, it is worth noting that Yuna killed Seymore first before he threw her off that mountain, even tho he was a patricidal, omnicidal, creepy, diseased toe-rag... |
Zane Tribal Tyne Alexandros chapter 4 . 1/30 And the story takes a turn for the DARK... |
Zane Tribal Tyne Alexandros chapter 3 . 1/30 Minerva Absolutly does count as a Summon, a godly one at that... |
Zane Tribal Tyne Alexandros chapter 2 . 1/30 And in this chapter we find out...What vexes all men? Scarlet: What, indeed. Godō Kisaragi( while thinking of leviathan): The sea…? President Shinra: Sums…? Genesis: The dichotomy of good and evil…? Sephiroth: A woman! |
Zane Tribal Tyne Alexandros chapter 1 . 1/30 Yes I like this, it has promise... and I hope you keep that promise by updating! |
NightmareKnight1 chapter 8 . 12/31/2019 I really like what you have here so far. Rare is the story that can balance a good crossover with decent plot progression, likeable characters (and in some cases unlikeable protagonists to make the protagonists shine) and good English. Not much for me to critique on your story, to be honest. I was enthralled from start to "finish" and am looking forward to what else comes in the future. |