Must have more asap. love it so far, keep it up. wonder what would happen if she was found out spying on them and asked to join in lol. Not to mention the little harem/orgy the other girls keep mentioning on an off that they would be down for it as well lol. Wonder if tatsuki ever teased him with a sock/foot job lol. Ichigo looks to be hooked on sex now, and you know a secret desire for the girls is for him to actually impregnate them/broke condom excuse or more. You know they would love it regardless and issin would be overjoyed by grandkids lol.

Real good so far. Cannot wait for the next one.

So, while I'm personally not a fan of lemons in general, the story seemed interesting, so I gave it a try. And it was.

I think you nailed Orihime's personality and her development seemed more than plausible. And seeing most of the story told from her perspective is really cool and different to most stories out there. It's something I wouldn't be against seeing more of, even if I just don't believe Ichigo and Orihime would ever actually be compatible in the long-term (Kubo didn't earn the ability to timeskip Ichigo and Orihime together at the end). I honestly like seeing Orihime as the main character: it's neat.

With that said, there are a few characters that I believe weren't portrayed as well as they should have been to make the story feel like a natural extension of canon.

[Now, considering I said I'm not a fan of lemons, you may wonder why my next criticism involves specifically that, when ignoring them is something I could possibly do: Well, unlike most stories, the lemons in this one were fairly integral to the story, to show how Ichigo and Tatsuki treated their relationship, and show what Orihime was seeing to clearly show why she developed the way she did. So my criticism here inevitably involves the lemons this time.]

While I can see Tatsuki as being more willing to experiment and lead Ichigo past his normal boundaries (which has been shown in this story), I can't see her being that forceful or demanding; and her portrayal comes across as somewhat of a bully; not a tomboy who loves martial arts and is incredibly good at karate (not judo). I think this possibly comes down to the perception that she doesn't like girly things, which, to a degree, is true, especially with her everyday clothing. But it also says in her profile (at the end of volume 3) that she "Worries that her name in kanji isn't cute, so she makes it a point to write in hiragana." And as such, it feels like Tatsuki has lost a noticeable amount of her complexity as a character.

While I definitely think Tatsuki would be the one to push boundaries and entice Ichigo, she wouldn't do it as harshly and forcefully as is written in this story.

And that leads me to my next complaint: Ichigo is practically spineless in this story. I get that he's got more old-fashioned honor, and that he's probably more shy about sex than most if the guys around him, but that doesn't mean he would constantly let himself be dominated in will and spirit. It just doesn't feel like Ichigo. Sure, the first time he was dazed and amazed, and the second and third time he was probably extremely nervous. But those are two very different things from letting oneself be dominated. Once he's comfortable enough to willingly go along with Tatsuki, he wouldn't keep acting like he's her slave. Would he ask for permission after she asked first? Yes. Would he do what Tatsuki asks? Yes. Would he work hard to please her? Yeah. Would he constantly be pushed around? No. And Tatsuki wouldn't be so pushy either.

Having Ichigo be more assertive and willing (it constantly felt like he was being forced against his will), and having Tatsuki be less demanding and equally as ambitious, would probably fix both their their characterization and dynamic, and make both of them feel like themselves.

My last complaint involves Mahana. An interesting character, and it's cool to see her in this (as well as Michiru and Ryo). But the story constantly says she's blunt, and honest, and open; yet it also regularly explains why she isn't going to do the open and blunt thing. It feels like the story is saying one thing and showing another when it comes to her actions.

Overall, though, it was interesting enough to keep me reading. This is certainly far from lazy writing, and the effort is not wasted. So good job.

Tatsuki/ichigo!

What’s the actual pairing for this story

Tatsuki is such a shitty friend in this. What a giant whore

Need more tatsuki/ichigo

Imagine if Tatsuki was aware of Orihime, is she going to be joining?

I'm pretty sure tatsuki knowing orihime is in love with ichigo wouldn't fuck him, let alone repeatedly fuck him. I find this hard to believe even for a random story.