Awww so sweet ️️

I really really enjoyed reading you so much.

This makes my heart happy

Perfect! I agree that a full scene would have been too much too soon. I liked the teenage awkwardness (including dark, cramped, school closet) and felt it suited the timeline well. Boy, Akane can be a Minx if she wants. Lol. And Ranma responded perfectly! Very much looking forward to the next chapter!

this was awesome read about ranma and akane... i missed this kind of story lines...

Omg love this story so much!
You’re staying true to character and I may not like Akane having nightmares of course but it brought them closer together! I wonder if she’ll have any more now lol

Omfg this is getting soooooooo good. My heart was racing reading it lolol. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Thanks for keeping the Ranma x Akane ship alive ️️️️️

Exactly! Smut would be totally unnatural hear. What you wrote was sweet. I enjoyed this chapter. That was clever to make Ranma cut vegetables. And yes, he'd be so hot in an apron cutting onions.

LOL! Ranma loves her! He literally jumped over the school gate to go home and check on her! And he wouldn't care about classes anyway. I just like the way that you are able to write Ranma's character so easily! I think the bit about Ryouga noticing their changed behavior is worth keeping, but he doesn't have to exchange words with Ranma. I thought that slowed the beginning down a bit,and Ryouga's quote was a little too cliche to be funny. Maybe you could just dictate yourself, as a narrator, that Ryouga thought Ranma had defiled her in some way. I liked the last sentence of this. Although blushing is an easy way to show embarrassment, be a little careful with how many times you use it. Substitute blushes with other patterns of shy behavior to keep the reader interested. Ranma fiddled with his hands when he's nervous, for instance, when he gave Akane a ring in the manga. The grammar is good. I feel that your story needs to feel more personal, though. If there is a way that you can write the scenes so that I, as a reader, can feel like I'm a fly on the wall while watching Ranma and Akane interact, then I'm positive that you can find it. :D I look forward to reading more of this story!

I'm glad you got it out! This little story is so sweet! You write Akane very well. I like how you described Ranma and Genma in the beginning. It's so them to fight until they remember that they're hungry.

That was very cute.

This is amazing, please continue

Awe! So cute! Would love to read more!

Waiting for the next chapter

Good chapter!