| Reviews for Naberius: The Alternate Path |
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   HolyKnight5 chapter 1 . 8/11 Real life suckered all inspiration and time to keep writing? |
| Portaltothenextworld chapter 1 . 8/1 man, i can't wait for the next chapter kudos |
| Istton chapter 1 . 6/12 I love this so much hope to see an update soon. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/14 So far I love it I read the first one it was amazing I can't wait to read this one keep up the good work |
| 12mlrthomas80 chapter 1 . 3/24 SKWEEEEEEEEEEEE!...OHMYGODTHATSANAWSOMEIDEAIREALLYHOWPYOUENDUPWRITINGTHIS! |
| weirdnerd chapter 1 . 1/11 ... i was really looking forward to seeing where both this and the origional were gonna go but now im worried that they are dead... |
| Badpressure chapter 1 . 10/2/2019 Looking forward to this. Also, am I alone in thinking that Kubo pretty much created the single most intimidating helmet/mask when he created ichigos vasto lorde form? |
| EndingF4te chapter 1 . 8/23/2019 is this abandoned? |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/16/2019 I've read the original story that you posted at least 4 times and I am so looking forward to this I truly hope you'll continue this story |
| cegi85 chapter 1 . 6/16/2019 Update your other funfic. |
| AoNoya chapter 1 . 4/13/2019 So does this mean that Naberius Heir is on hiatus or whats gonna happen with that story, granted I prefer the harem aspect of this fic because thats just the nature of dxd, but Heir original is also really good and so much work has already been put into it. Or has that story technically finished? (i'm not caught up on it) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/11/2019 '''RANMA1/2''' queen female-ranma ? Shampoo, ''''Yu Yu Hakusho""" knight Yusuke ? Kurama knight Hiei |
| monkiepawn chapter 1 . 2/9/2019 Looks good and interesting, but the emotions where all time high during almost all chapter with a lot of people screaming, demanding, and questioning others. And yeah, I know that you cant be quiet when someone close is in danger, taken somewhere or in a ritual of some kind but it was still annoying. Also, a LOT of characters and names in just the first chapter, I dont like the idea of going back every now and then when a character appears in a new chapter and it seems he/she has made previous appearance. Anyway, as I said, really interesting |
| razmire chapter 1 . 1/27/2019 It's your story, write it the way that you want it to be, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. If they don't like it, then they can get off their lazy ass and write their own. That's just my opinion. |
| Crimson green flame chapter 1 . 1/21/2019 This is a great 1st chapter i love it i can barley wait for the next. It seems like nomater which crossover you do its amazing i hope you update your other stories soon as well |
