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basically I love this story. It's literally amazing

Poor Alec!

Sweet date!

I think there were a few spots that were rushed, but overall it turned out fine so don't worry. I liked seeing a bit more of Alec in this scene, as well as his little meeting with Magnus too. I'm looking forward to seeing how they continue to interact in the future.

Poor Clary!

Yes! I love Will's fear of ducks, and I laughed so much at the ridiculousness that it brought about...especially when duplicated in Jace. The only thing missing was his missed opportunity to slur Lightwood into Lightworm, but I'm certain that is still coming in later chapters...despite the slight exaggeration of their reaction to a duck, I still loved this chapter and am looking forward to more.

loved it. I really want to know what's gonna happen with her brother and dad

I really like this story! Hope you continue!

WOW... Is Jonathon being a good brother or is he persuing Clary. I cant wait for the the next chapter

Unspeakable good

I KNEW IT

Well this is odd. Umm I hope Clary doesn't get too attached fo him. That would be very disturbing to have brother and sister as kind and queen..

DUH! Of course Iz and Si! Also, you wrote Raphael instead of Jonathan. I love this by the way. it's creative and well written.