Reviews for A Tale Of Susie (DeltarunexUndertale crossover)
ElatedEmoElmoEater chapter 1 . 11/1/2019
Asgore Fanficwriter stay determined. or else the future is not in your sans
Dav009 chapter 2 . 7/21/2019
Really hope to see more soon. It’s a really fun story.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/5/2019
please continue the story! it's going pretty well so far
Guest chapter 2 . 2/19/2019
so you're able to update the picture but not the story... M
BrieferCat chapter 2 . 1/14/2019
Is Kris DEAD? How is sans going to react with not a human but a monster leaving the ruins?
BrieferCat chapter 1 . 1/14/2019
Hey liking the fic so far but there is one mistake I spotted Toriel says Carey instead of carry, Other then that its great
Glor chapter 2 . 1/4/2019
Interesting beginning. Did Susie accidentally absorb Kris's soul during teleportation?
If that's the case, then she can actually freely walk through the Barrier, or absorb the other six souls and just break it on her own. Setting things to the way they're supposed to be however, is going to be a challenge...
Sweet Smilie chapter 2 . 12/9/2018
Aww...
3! Please!
(Imagina a Susie con una podadora sonriendo aterradora mente)
Guest chapter 2 . 12/8/2018
YES! CANT WAIT FOR CHAPTER 3
Blackmask666 chapter 2 . 12/8/2018
Sorry if this Chapter seems a bit too short! ~ Chapter 3 is under development and Is going to be long! so be prepared for that! -
A boi chapter 1 . 12/7/2018
Moooooore
ThePorpoisePhilosopher chapter 1 . 12/5/2018
So I uhh, like this.. alot. I really do! It has an interesting future ahead of it! BUT IF LANCER IS DEAD
Sweet Smilie chapter 1 . 12/4/2018
I like this!
And Frisk? Them dessapear
Y inglés no es mi lengua materna.
Kris, Rasiel donde están!
linkthetoaoftime chapter 1 . 12/2/2018
This is pretty cool, I hope there will be more.
Lunar Moon Butterfly chapter 1 . 12/2/2018
I like it so far! Keep going!

The fact that someone like this story fills you with DETERMINATION.
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