| Reviews for Percy Jackson: Mission Marvel |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 8/27 This is really great... Did you happen to also post it on Wattpad? |
 TheInfernalInstruments chapter 10 . 8/27 Oh. I saw the critique that one guy said... Its literally the same as mine. Whoops. Evidently though it means you haven't fixed it yet no offense. |
| TheInfernalInstruments chapter 9 . 8/27 Hi! This is really good. This has already been published for a while, so you probably won't see this, but I have a small critique. Urm... you're supposed to start a new paragraph every time someone different says something. So like, instead of "What mission?" Natasha's voice was deceptively calm. "Peace in our time." Ultron said, and out of the walls exploded the Iron Legion. It would be "What mission?" Natasha's voice was deceptively calm. "Peace in our time." Ultron said, and out of the walls exploded the Iron Legion. Other than that, this is a GREAT story. |
| Guest chapter 18 . 8/13 cool story |
| Bookworm6908 chapter 1 . 6/9 Oh I see what you did there :) |
| Easter egg chapter 1 . 4/18 I wonder who the guy living in the UK was... *COUGHharrypotterCOUGH* |
| MCU PJO HP PKMN Lover chapter 8 . 4/18 pat on the back |
| Hedwig chapter 11 . 4/14 You are such a great writer,I love ur books pls keep it up I are amazing |
| HL chapter 2 . 4/9 “Yes, his parents had issues.” So did his sister. And her husband. Who was her brother. |
| Wise girl 2 chapter 3 . 4/5 I think you made annabeths IQ to low. I think she should be 280 If stark is 259 because she is that smart |
| xxXMr. DarknessXxx chapter 1 . 4/3 You attempt to description drop Harry Potter. Be careful |
| StarSerpent chapter 16 . 3/10 I’m not against killing characters to drive the plot, but what’s the point of a crossover if you’re gonna stick to canon on everything and not show any divergence. None of the pjo characters here have affected the plot in any way so far, and they’re portrayed as criminally underpowered. Really, you may as well put PJO-Characters-But-Useless Watching the MCU as your fic title, because that’s what this is. |
| Janis13 chapter 1 . 1/4 “One: some British kid in the UK, currently living in surrey” I HAVE FOUND A HARRY POTTER REFERENCE |
| Godessofdemigods chapter 17 . 12/13/2019 I just finished binge reading like 10 chapters. (wich took me a suprisingly short time) and I LOVE LOVE LOVED IT! Its sooooo GOOOD |
| Godessofdemigods chapter 1 . 11/23/2019 AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH I am a HUUUUUUUGGGEEEE fan of both. I mean WOW that is amazing like WOW.. Your writing skills are soooo amazing its not even like reading a fanfiction its like reading a proper book by uncle Rick or watching a Marvel movie.. OMG ITS THE BEST! I love how sassy Percy is. #Persassy and Sassico for life |
