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juste pour la suite de ton écriture, essayes d’aérer un peu plus, ça deviendra plus plaisant

This is good

Great story. Thanks!

au non de non, c'est juste fantastique, formidable et incroyable je dirai juste que les chapitres sont un peu court pour profiter réellement du plaisir de cette histoire. Mais autrement c'est génial continue

Finally! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Hope it comes soon

Amazing! I love it! Keep up the good work!

Glad Harry and Luna are friends and he is not under the thumb of Dumbledore.
Wonder what his brother Aaron will think when he finds out his brother is still alive.

This is an amazing Story so far and I'm excited to see the next chapter!
It's well thought out and I already want to read more!
I think it would be easier to read if you stuck to a third person POV or Harrys POV and try and make the paragraphs a little shorter otherwise it's a really good story and Keep writing!

I see Harry either in Thestral House given his past and what happened to him early in his life or Kneazle because he is cautious and curious and has such potential so I am tied.

like the chapter keep up the good work. For house I like the thestral house.

Thestral house for all!

I just want to tell you that I love this chapter, but that I saw a mistake near the beginning, it said that "Dad was the Charms teacher" not "Dad is the Charms teacher" You slipped out of the wrong tense there. If that was correct then you still slipped out of the correct tense before and after that. It was really good! I felt bad for Harry at the end, but then I read "Harry had no idea how much is dream will come true" I about screamed in excitement. Hope the next chapter is just as exciting! So pumped!

Manipulative bastard that Dumbledore.
Worse that Lily and James listened to the old bastard really throwing their son away like that.

Has some oddly worded parts, but you actually took the story of that night and inserted another character. I love it.