Cuando actualizaras la historia bo puedo esperar hasta q salga el próximo cap

Im sorry but what made you think this was a good idea. As a real fan of pokemon I'm disgusted.

Me gusta mucho tu historia espero que la actualices pronto no puedo esperar a leer el próximo capítulo .

Espero que la actualices pronto me gusta mucho la historia

How about a wolf queen or lupa pokegirl

I really like the concept so far.

Love this! There are so few pokegirl fanfics. Please update often

Wtf do I mean this was revised may of this year o.0?! The grammar is still atrocious! Get a beta reader, the plot is great, the grammar is not.

Just occasional spacing and punctuation errors i see and when is naruto going to have some nightmares about this mysterious woman and when is naruto going to be normally

Eve

great work

Really fun chapter.
Really enjoyed the slime and tentacle smut (especially the gag and nipple sucking)
But hope you will plan more tentacle and slime kinks in future, and especially having catalyst also fill naruto butthole next time.

This is an interesting story. But why does Naruto talk in the third person?

Great first chapter with a truly unique, promising plot and for the most part is very, very well done. But a few of the sentences seem to be randomly missing words.

Why won’t Naruto catch yin and yun? If he doesn’t catch them, someone may try to do so themselves/