When are you going to make more chapter's

This is way out of character for Kagome because she is usually kind, and polite to others.

Alright, I'm going to have to ask you to slow down your pacing. Yes, I do like your story, but I feel like you're not letting the story progress naturally. Seeing as I just finished binge reading the chapters you've written so far, I'd say to add in some more details in each chapter. Adding in some extra snippets could get your pacing back to a good speed.

Basically, add more details to each chapter and space out each event so that it feel better.

Still going to be reading,
OLDAAB

Interesting story I am intrigued as to what happens next, please make the chapters longer it is my only real problem

I am honestly loving the plot and incidents occurring already. Please keep going with this book if you can.

*snicker* nicely done

Keep it going, it rules

Ayye

ohh! can't wait to see what happens next!

This is great, I hope you have enough time to update soon. Though I noticed that you updated recently already but still. Whenever you have time.

yAASS!

I love this crossover!

interesting chapter