I hope you write the next ones soon.

Great. In terms of the vote, I vote for suggestion 2 because like you I think it flows better. For the next chapter, I was thinking maybe Monica could be the one that Kanjigar in ARGGGH could rescue when they are attacked by Vendal and his shoulders and Kanjigar could witness the love that his son has for her. Then after that the three could have a bonding moment. Just a suggestion. Good Luck.

Another great Chapter. Will Patrick and Elizabeth get suspicious like Steve and Eli and work with them to figure out why Jim and Monica are acting weird? Can't wait for the next one.

Ahh. that is so sweet. Love the chapter. Hope another one comes soon. Good luck.

I am really enjoying this story. Especially the Monica Draal ship. I really hope the story is seen through. I can wait the see what happens next.

Wow. Amazing bonding moment for Monica, Claire and Claire's best Friends. Fantastic. Hope to see the next one soon.

Amazing! I look forward to seeing your one-shots between Monica and the other characters. I'd love to see them get closer.

Amazing! I love the new green armour that Monica can wear. It's incredible.

Wow. Amazing! Loved it so much. I really hope Monica doesn't lose her memories of Jim's secret life. I'd love to see her in the fight against Angor Rot in the final episode and this time you can wound him and get even with him. I'd love to see her participate in Seasons 2 and 3. She is such a cool member of the group; I love her so much.

It's all coming along great. I'm so looking forward to the final battle. Will Monica get hurt in this episode or because she could fight Angor Rot giving Claire and Toby time to get away with the spell but then she could get severely wounded and they go back and they managed to get her through the portal with the spell? Or will she get wounded by Angor Rot in the final episode of Season 1 and this also makes Jim want to go alone into the Darklands? Whatever happens I look forward to it. Good luck

OMG...I love the scenes between Monica and Draal. I really hope they get together and that Draal doesn't get killed. I literally cried in this chapter when everyone said their goodbyes to ARGH. I hope they get him back soon.

Hey, please don't forget this story! You are doing an amazing job on it!

Hi, I just wanted to say I'm really enjoying your fic so far; and I look forward to the next chapter! Monica seems like a very interesting character, and I think it's neat that you're including a bit about their father since the show didn't really touch up on that much.

This is really good. Can you please do more? And are you going to make Monica fall for Draal and if so what are you going to do when they go to Merlin's tomb? Please save him. Also Monica's dad can stuff it if he think's she's going to go and visit him. Sorry but it's just like my dad or should I say "sperm donor" and I have very strong and angry feelings for him. She shouldn't go and just tear up that plane ticket.

When is next chapter going to be?