This was a really awesome story looking forward to more

Dude if Blue Planet his a sapling of the World Tree that means as he gets older he can canect the nine realms and open path ways to new world's. My guess is this world is full of Magic that he can possibly use right.

when is the update coming PLEASE

An excellent update and gives good insight to how more things are changing up in the overall layout of things to come.

ah I'm glad this fic got updated and was wondering will enri still have goblins or no?

ah I'm glad this fic got updated and was wondering will enri still have goblins or no?

Thank you for responding (even if its from a half-review), I was worried that you might have gotten overwhelmed by life or just decided that you didn't want to continue.

As for my previous comment; I was confused on how so many characters would subsist in such a small short time slot that stories such as these can give. (Not asking for longer chapters, merely stating it is difficult to have so-many that require scene time to properly develop) So, I was rather fascinated on what road you would take. And I cant say that Im disappointed.

Infact, I would put this as a success of how to input character motivating with the development of the plot.
We never really see how the maids or Sebas is contenting himself in his roll, but you changed that. You linked the forward progression on the small tasks and daily running's of day-to-day lives of the "Supreme-Beings" and "Creations". Things that the Overlord originally focused sole on.

As for Your comment of "off screen" is not accurate in my opinion. Off screen is reserved to push off plot points, not useless meandering that is required to get from scene A to scene B, you used transitions wonderfully (loved the scene with Touch Me drifting down with heroic splendor, he seems to me to be that guy that plays "Flight of the bumble bee" when ever he starts up his helicopter), you really encapsulated the iner-workings of a man looking to find what fleeting justice and revel in it while he can.

As for the side views: we get with our village elder put into perspective that these people are not just dumb plot devices, but real people who act on their own reasoning and culture. Sebas included.

Sorry if my last review came out as rather half-baked, my computer seems to not like the coding of this site. Keeps missing the comma or leaving them out, or flat out losses data of what has been written. Twenty minutes of thoughtful concertation lost, I suppose. Still, worth it to have something of substance to read.

i like this story when will more chapters come out.
i am egerly waiting for more awesome chapters.
and i wonder what momonga friends are doing in the tomb and i would want a see were there toger and talk as friends and have fun togeter.
that would be nice to see.
from an old fan. i love overlord anime and the novel.
have a nice day.
:D

buen fanfic-good fanfic

Nice work I look forward to more

Welcome back, been so long since the last update.
I like your potrayal of touch me, but his luac name confused me during the chief's monolouge,i was expecting touch to use arthur'sname or any of the famous round table knights like lancelot, galahad etc...
And speaking of monolouge... its way too long! I was happy with the long chapter but that happiness was dashed cuz more than half of its whole body was fro, the chief's monolouge, i mean, changing pov and having monolouges in overlord is normal, but the chief's monolouge was way too long... hes barely mentioned in canon.. like only maybe 3 to 5 times or less, but here, its like hes the mc.

Nice

Ahhhh damn it. Should have read this before...

Please update soon