I love how the story flows. And I like the ending. XD

subtle and sweet _

Oh, the angst! xD This was wonderfully and well written! Kudos!

-Moshi Moshi Mai

Beautiful story. I really like it especially the ending and the structure of the text.

Gorgeous. Very beautifully written. I like the fact you never say too much. Excellent exercice in contrast.

I enjoyed it thoughoughly and immensely. Seishiro's lines need slight tweaking, but other than that, good stuff.
Uozumi

different, good.

Lovely. Absolutely lovely.

how... beautiful.

lovely writing... true to character... simple and delicate.. beautiful. no other words can describe it.. just.. beautiful.

thank you so much..

this is SxS i love and worship.

~ferni

you evil asian genius... people and their fics. i swear, there should be a step program to get off fics... not like anyone would want to.

I think you accomplished exactly what you wanted to in this fic. Nice parallel structure, and an interesting vignette overall. Well-written as always. Thanks for writing it.