Good story looking forward for more of your Work

I love the shego part where she remembered how it felt being a hero
Keep it up

I'm curious as to how the story will play out. But I will suggest finding yourself someone to preview/preread your chapter(s) before posting them as certain words are missing from sentences and there a some flow issues (words hustled around or doubled).

I’m seriously scared for Kim once everyone turns on her. How will she recover?

Wow. You’re pulling out all the stops. This is brilliant. Keep it up.

I love it. Keep up the good work.