This was mildly interesting.

Please remove the humor tag for this story, it's not funny at all and should have a drama or angst tag.

Please keep this story going! It is one of my favorites already!

Interesting story! Though is it dead at this point..?

really good story! continue the great work!

Nice, very well done battle scene! Enjoyable, and fun to read. Humorous at the beginning if I may say so

Hmm, filler chapter? I found myself quite bored while reading this. And the issue of it being short and not as detailed as it could be. Remember to apply those.

Repeated typo: "Driftviel" should be "Driftveil".

From what I've read, (all 24 chapters) your story is quite nice. I hope you'll keep the story going as it's difficult to find a Pokemon fan fiction, even one with a twist to an actual game. Now. My issue? I feel like some details are lacking. Nothing too bad, just try and include more detail. Also. Length? Yeah, it's pretty good. However, you're more likely to keep readers going if it's longer, and has good detail. Besides those two, I rather enjoy the story. You could probably slow it down so it's not as fast paced, and maybe include a bit more dialogue between Zach and the legendaries. Enough ranting from me, so happy writing, and be sure to try to apply those tips!

welcome back!

Don’t kill him

Typo alert: the B2W2 starting city is Aspertia, not Asperta.

Seems we finally have a myth arc going.

that will be an insanly hard task but he can do it

that's a lot of people to be taken for their 'fun' game.