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Hell yeah I enjoyed it! You don't have to apologize for anything. I'm all for future romance events!

Dude, spoiler alert! I'm almost done watching all the romance scenes from the game so that I can appreciate the OVAs even more. But I was reminded of how cute Makoto is and wanted to read some more fanfic. Thank you for your beautiful stories! Can't wait for P5R!

You med me tear up quite a bit! I could easily see this supplementing P5 story :')

Of course you threw in the carrot reference, didn't you? But seriously, that would've flown over my head had you not specified...

Another interesting thing about pregnancy cravings is that it's not uncommon to see the child(ren) develop a particular liking to that food. When my mother was pregnant with me, she apparently latched onto all sorts of potato-related foods. I'm talking french fries, baked potatoes, hashbrowns, etc. Fast forward to me and potato foods are my absolute favorite! (let's ignore the fact that they're REALLY high in carbs and I need to be a little careful with that). My older brother and sister also developed food cravings from mom, but I can't remember what they were. Anyway, fun tidbit! Feel free to play around with that if you want.

That was just too damn sweet. I really love your writing style. The emotional depth of this chapter especially was phenomenal. I can't wait to read more of your five.

Good

great chapter

I don’t really know what to say, other than this story is excellent, your characterizations feel spot on, and I can’t wait for more.

It is very good to see a new entry for Deck of Cards! These new chapters seem to just breathe new life into the pairing that is a pleasure to read. Please, keep it up. I'm quite enjoying the Cardinal series so far, especially since they are more lighthearted than Ryuu's chapters, and the scenarios are pretty interesting. I know that the originality part makes uploading new pieces difficult, but they are such a treat!

Thank you again, you write pretty high quality Shumako pieces!

I remember reading this fic on AO3 but couldn't remember the name of it. And now I've found it again!

I completely agree with you why Ren and Makoto are made for each other, from the many ways they support one another both in the real world and the Metaverse to their strong sense of justice.

Jesus, it's been a while since I've read a lewd piece, and the embarrassment continues to not fall at the pace I want it to after reading one. I've been reading fanfiction stories for nearly five years now and the exposure hasn't desensitized me yet.

Anyway, it's good to see you keeping things up with this story. The last time I read a Seven Deadly Sins piece, it was also a Shumako story written by Ryuu no Kami. I'm interested to see how you do this in the coming weeks. Also, I commend you on getting ready for Shumako week as well; I need to get working on that too, but after tomorrow I shouldn't have any holdups.

Anyway, good work. It's always a struggle wading through these types of pieces, but well worth it if you've got more ideas. Thanks for posting!

great chapter!

2/1.5 not lewd enough.

Ok but really that’s kind of awkwardly, funny situation. Only works cause it’s anime, but yeah nice job.