| Reviews for The Queen's Gambit |
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   offbrandbiscuit chapter 36 . 4/13 I wonder what Kris did to Sarah. I'm 100% he definitely didn't just leave her there though, considering his feelings on her after what she did to his whole family and the fact the house was silent. Can't say she didn't deserve it. I'm having a lot of fun with this story. Probably one of my favourite Deltarune continuations thus yet. |
| hellsingsage chapter 34 . 3/30 why is the story so fgood please update soon I've been waiting for Susie to be part of the story again real Susie I mean not the art that came alive because Dark World s |
| hellsingsage chapter 32 . 3/20 this is like a less subtle Silent Hill 2 if you put Chris Susie in the place of Pyramid Head and if you put Chris Susie in the place of pyramid head and Noel as the main character I forgot his name and like I said made everything a lot less subtle |
| offbrandbiscuit chapter 29 . 1/28 RIP The Dragonborn “Fus ro dah” That was a pretty great chapter! The pace is really picking up and I’m really getting invested in this world. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
| Guest chapter 25 . 11/8/2019 Came for the ominous introduction and stayed for multi-genre Dark Worlds and Ralsei With A Gun. Really amazed by the details and effort put into making the scenarios and battles, and very happy to see the characters interact. |
| Darth Lehr chapter 25 . 10/30/2019 Kris trusts Noelle completely now huh? Their relationship thickens. |
| hellsingsage chapter 24 . 10/21/2019 I love this story its amazing and fun! the only thing I think you need to work on is use the term overthink you should use rethink or reconsider. |
| hellsingsage chapter 15 . 9/25/2019 tha fucking bitch is poisoning M |
| s3731997 chapter 20 . 9/13/2019 Zelda! |
| offbrandbiscuit chapter 20 . 9/12/2019 Sheesh, this story really deserves more reviews. I'm loving the world-building for the Dark World, it's fantastic. Especially the way you've involved other minor characters in the Light World like Berdly, Noelle, etc. As always, good work, buddy. |
| offbrandbiscuit chapter 8 . 12/30/2018 I wonder what Kris is planning... As always, nice work, bucko! |
| offbrandbiscuit chapter 7 . 12/22/2018 Nice work, bud! I like Ralsei's actions towards the end of the chapter, because he doesn't want his kindness taken advantage of. I felt the exact same when fighting Spades King. I thought it'd be like Asgore, but he instead betrayed me. Bastard. Anyways, once again, good work, buddy! |
| offbrandbiscuit chapter 5 . 12/12/2018 Nice, nice! Asides from Usurpation of the Dark, this is the only Deltarune fanfiction I've seen so far that I'd count as good. Great work, pal! |
| LadyDetia chapter 3 . 12/6/2018 This is so interesting. I feel bad ror Kris getting stuck with Berdly. Berdly is quite annoying. |
| sonic chapter 2 . 11/28/2018 I liked the chapter!1 |
