Honestly, I think you should edit this Corruption because of how much hidden potential you have here. It would be a good book if only there wasn't so many errors and the plot made sense.

But this is only my opinion. If you want, you could delete it but then a good story would be gone.

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eyyy..can't wait for that sequel tho

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awww mannnn you are evil! XD this is truly uncalled for -w-

Merry Christmas to you too.

dam...thats dark...

oof...Sonic...poor sonikku.. vengeance is not good for you.. it destroys you inside outHappy Birthday btw XD

Dam...that's heart-crushing lines at the endpoor guy...btw happy birthdayhope u have an amazing day

Really, Shadow..? Really? XD ultimate lifeform..yeah right XD

amazing chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

Very intrigued about the new sword. Is is Sonic's? Or does it belong to someone else?

I really like this, I like this a lot. It's an interesting and original take on Sonic's backstory that I haven't even thought of before. Keep up the good work!

No problem! Not many people write Dark Sonic stories, instead they do Shadow stories, which seems to aggrivate me sometimes. Shadow is one of my least favorite characters, but I'm not gonna hate on anyone who likes him!

I've got two things to say:

First off, thank you so much for the shoutout! I really appreciate it and I'm pleased that you are enjoying the story so far! It really made my day today so thank you.

Second, I'm really excited to see where this goes. It's an idea that not many people have thought of with Dark Sonic, and it's truly amazing. Keep up the good work!