I enjoy your stories but the switches between first and third person can make it a little hard to read. Still read all of them though!

I’m re-reading. Great story

I enjoyed your story, it needs a bit of editing, but I noticed you were calling for a beta. your story was different, I liked it. thank you for writing.

jenny? harry potter is saving jenny? there isn't a jenny!

Awwww! I loved this story!

Will Emmett spend the rest of eternity plat by video games and screwing Rose or will be try to make himself useful ,I don't know maybe start an online business maybe.
Rose could do something with cars. Maybe him and Peter could go into business together.
I wonder if Eddie felt his mate die?

Only she doesn't like to have to tell someone something twice . It seems to piss her off a bit.
So what is dr. Rangel hydro do about this I wonder?
Will be come after them for revenge?
Will he also try to gather an army like Vicky did? We saw how that turned out..

now that Eddie knows about her shield would he tell his mate who would in turn pass that information on to the Volturi which will mean that Aro will send some of his guard to try to collect her under the pretence that they were not told she had a gift after he was good enough to let Jasper take her while she was turning?
Guess we'll find out soon enough.

Just can't catch a break from assholes and idiots.
I am surprised that Aro hasn't sent someone to check up on her.
What the hell does doctor fang think he can do to her and Jasper?
How in that polluted mind did Carlisle come to the conclusion that it was Jasper and Bella's fault that he lost his so called family?
He is so pathetic that he cannot understand it was his fault completely.

Just can't catch a break from assholes and idiots.
I am surprised that Aro hasn't sent someone to check up on her.
What the hell does doctor fang think he can do to her and Jasper?
How in that polluted mind did Carlisle come to the conclusion that it was Jasper and Bella's fault that he lost his so called family?
He is so pathetic that he cannot understand it was his fault completely.

Its losing. What was such a large group of nomads doing wandering around?
Why is it that Emmett and Rose can't seem to ever live on their own.
Alice needs to shut up about their clothes.

What Esme should do is drain Carlisle's accounts and somewhere he would never find her a start her life over .

That is the problem with having a virgin for a mate.

With two squirrel munchers in the area they are gonna by to screw up the ecology especially if she is going to eat all of the predators. she needs to start on Peter and Char's diet. to save the wildlife.
It is Volturi.
I wonder how long it will be until Esme figures out that it is Eddie and not her that is Carlisle's mate?
It is off of the Volturi.

He should have taken her to feed the normal way of a vampire.
Didn't take long.