good chapter keep it up

Wow! What a fanfic. Really enjoyed it.

Good fic! Language was good and I enjoyed!

Our vocabulary is good. But please use punctuations.

its a very good fic i love the haphne couple and you do this pretty well. for me this is perfect as one shot but if you wanna continue this try to put a strong personality on daphne Jk never write alot of her so we must create one.
very good fic and sorry for my bad grammar english is not my first language too

Not a bad story