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its good but can you write more chapters?

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please update immediately

Good to see some activity outta ya! Still an awesome chapter, even though I suspect it's the same as last time with some grammatical corrections lol

When are you going to update dude? Also pl try to write more of your own words. Try not to incorporate more words from the books.
Good luck!

Not to try to be mean, but why did you not have Percy leave a note or tell anyone why or where he was going? Overall I really like your story so far and looking forward to reading more.

Ok, I like a good story as much as the next guy, but a majority of the chapter here was taken word for word from the actual book. I’m ok with it as long as it gives more to it like giving plot points or more than “Annabeth cheats oh Percy goes rogue now”. I felt that compared to the amount of the book that was in this chapter the amount that was from you was minuscule and I’m sorry but I was a bit disappointed that there wasn’t more to it.

I love it so far!

Hey man I always liked this story. An ill be here for the whole ride. Keeep the work up I know it's hard but you got this man!

so he gave up god hood for her and to help the world but why didn't he confront her

Yo, welcome back homie! Good to see ya again, hope you're feeling refreshed

Are you going to Bringing Christianity God into this? I for one think that was kind of messed up, but cool at the same time. You Don't see writers writing anything loving God within a Percy Jackson story. But I can see how this could work

Stop explaining things.

A few spelling and grammar mistakes, but it's still pretty good