Reviews for Just A Smile
LillianMarie2 chapter 16 . 8/1
no matter how many times I read this story I absolutely love it!
TheProcastinatingPerfectionist chapter 68 . 7/31
This has to be the most dramatic story I’ve ever read in my life. But I enjoyed EVERY SECOND OF IT.
This is going to be one of my favourites for a long time.
You’re a great author, even tho you a lot of mistakes in your written but that you can quickly fix it.
I can help if want, just send me your un-betaed chapters And I’ll fix your mistakes.
Guest chapter 49 . 7/30
Please, STOP using whilst. I know English isn’t your first language, so maybe get a beta?
ifw.rae chapter 68 . 7/22
not once has a book on this app made me cry, until this one. this is such wonderful and beautiful story. thank you for sharing this with the world.
ReaderOfDramione chapter 68 . 7/20
So the overall detail and goodness is really good and live e
ReaderOfDramione chapter 68 . 7/20
WHYYYY! WHY DID THEY HAVE TO DIE!
ReaderOfDramione chapter 57 . 7/20
Lily is such a sadistic sadist. THE BITCH SHOULD DIE FOR WHAT SHE DID!
ReaderOfDramione chapter 56 . 7/20
OMG IM CRYING SO MUCH! VERY GOOD AT SETTING A SCENE DEAR AUTHOR
Ziyah chapter 68 . 7/18
the last chapter made burst into tears, I have never read a story more amazing and fascinating than this. The way you wrote about their love, it makes me jealous not feeling this kind of emotion.
Sinfull-Innocence chapter 66 . 7/17
Great story with a heartbreaking ending. If the choice was them dying or James surviving and having an affair with lily then I would much rather they died as I feel that would have tainted this story.
Also I would totally read a riddle era story
Guest chapter 68 . 7/17
So so beautiful I swear you are going to kill me with all the fluff.
cshen.julienne chapter 68 . 7/16
Someone told me this before, but I wanna say it to you now. You have a way with words.

I am always touched by what you write :) Thank you, and do not stop writing.
TheLaw chapter 28 . 7/16
professor snape being unhappy for them makes no sense especially when he could get together with lily with no competition. I feel like this story goes too hard on lily simply because she didn't like James or his behavior and attitude which doesn't make sense. Because her reasons are valid she doesn't think james is a bad person just a immature git kinda like malfoy. However snape having lily on a pedestal makes sense even though it's sad because he doesn't know what a healthy relationship is and eventually is going to have to realize lily is as human as everyone else
ElianaxIsabella chapter 68 . 7/16
You had to go bring my feels back all over again? this was so beautiful, I wish an AU where they live was a thing.
musicmiester chapter 7 . 7/9
You. Keep. Making. Me. Smile... and I am over the moon rolling in happiness over what’s happening and the relationships that are developing and regrowing!
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