ARG! UNHAPPINESS! I keep thinking of this and all the tough moments ahead and ...*cries*.
-I take back my previous comment because it works better here: NOW you're cruel! Nathan thinking Duke and Audrey spent the night together and all his self-deprecating thoughts. :'( (it's okay though emotional roller-coasters are fun :P)
-Totally did not see that coming, Nathan making career change. Ooooh Audrey's gonna be mad he's putting himself more in the line of fire. I'm so worried for him if he thinks it's cause she doesn't want him as a real partner XD.
-Yikes, the stuff with Duke hurts! "All lies" really got me.
-Lol, I'm with Nathan: “allies” Audrey, seriously!? That's less than partner and friend!
-I liked when he was ‘distracted looking up at her’. Somehow that was just a lovely detail.

Oh you are cruel! I was looking forward to how you'd tweak the Ripley address and kiss and you flung us back to season 1! Gah! :D Hm...now I don't think I can see this Nathan asking Audrey out at this point... will he still turn up to find her kidnapped so soon?!
To tide me over between your updates I "have to" read other Haven fics (I really only just found Haven so I'm behind) and I really like the 'flavor' of your Haven writing.

LOL, careful Nathan, your obsession with Audrey is showing! (Please remember to take care of yourself too!)
Oh man I am loving this. That might have been my favorite chapter yet-I just keep re-reading it. I just love mutual pining. Nathan going on about what he likes about Audrey and brooding about Brody was great. XD I think I’ve officially reached a point where this story is taking on a little life of its own distinct from the show and it’s giving me so many feels.
Fav bits were ….gah, so much….Nathan seeing his smile in the window and “his tiny, fragile dream”. 3
I re-watched the quarantine and wendigo episodes after this, and I like how you made the ‘I only trust you’ moment a bigger deal.
Duke and Nathan being so at odds is so painful. I do NOT like the talk of who’s killing who [*insert unhappy/worried face*]. I’m glad Dwight’s here and I can’t wait to read your spin on the quarantine! Now we just need Gloria!

Aw man, what a ride (o_o) I could barely read it in one sitting cause, gosh, do I just want to tell Nathan it'll be okay! I’m impressed how intense you made it feel even without physical sensations and I really got swept up in it too when Audrey hugged him :’)

Oh wow! I just came back to comment on chapter 4 and there's a chapter 5?! Yay! Okay, before I go read it, here's what I was going to say about 4:
No! Cliffhanger!
Gah, that was ending on such a sweet moment and then it was suddenly sad when there’s no more cracks and then yikes! The Rev lurking in the dark!
I wish I could comment more on the changes to plot/characters but I'll have to re-watch these seasons first. Fav line this time might have been about his bones being made of lead XD And when it hit him that he couldn't ask the Chief about the ring. Very accurate thought process :'(
Still loving Nathan’s POV. Thanks for this lovely start to the New Year!

Wow! Always so exciting to see a new update pop up on a new special fic! Made my night :D I’m loving this! Your writing flows well and I’m impressed how you can transition smoothly between skimming over a case then back to more detailed happenings. Nathan’s POV may be hard but you do it very well.
All the little changes you’re weaving are really interesting! It’s fun to be taking a different path but hitting so many of the same beats. Poor Nathan’s really got it rough in this version! I hope his self-esteem improves. Darn it, Duke, with the “Pinocchios”!
Such a joy to be following a them fall in love again 3 I really like how you’re writing Nathan’s insecurity over being able to feel her touch. That line about “irresistible temptation” was awesome.
Standout things:
-Intriguing how the Teagues are darker!
-Audrey standing up for Nathan and he overhears :’)
-Kudos to Nathan for noticing the cracks ;)
-“His mind’s all he has left.” Possibly my favorite line.
-Exploring Nathan’s feelings about Hansen
-His thoughts about the real Audrey & Brody (Nice how the glorifying of Brody just slipped in)
-The banter over Nathan wanting a cheeseburger instead of pancakes lol!
-“boundaries of his skin” and “own body’s confines”. Right?! I Love the way you describe how blurring Nathan’s Trouble would be, not having any distinction between yourself and things…
-Love the attention to detail with Nathan’s trouble. Things like, “his view of the streets changes so he thinks he’s collapsing”. Another of my favorite lines!
Thank you for such in-depth content and I’m seriously looking forward to seeing where this goes!

I loved Nathan's feeling when he sees Brody with Audrey. Please continue.

I loved how Nathan was given one day to be normal. Please continue.

The day started off weird enough for Jar Jar Mortdecai with some lovely morning munchen. Then he heard some loud nyyyaaaaing and looked around. There were a bunch of giant weeaboos heading straight for him! He started sobbing and levitated right into the path of a fabulous man who was running in the opposite direction. The man knocked Jar Jar Mortdecai to the forest floor and the weeaboos passed them by.

Jar Jar Mortdecai introduced himself to the man who was named Qui-Gon Levi, a Jedi poser. 'Mesa Culled Jar Jar Mortdecai. Mesa Your Humble body pillow.'

They were soon joined by Qui-Gon Levi's padawan King Julien Kenobi. Jar Jar Mortdecai offered to take Qui-Gon Levi and King Julien Kenobi to his home city of Toys-R-Us-Gunga.

When they arrived at Toys-R-Us-Gunga Boss Melman , with a little pursuasion, offered the trio a neon furry oc to go through the Planet Core. Jar Jar Mortdecai said 'Better transgender here than transgender In Da Core' but then thought better of it and got in the neon furry oc with Qui-Gon Levi and King Julien Kenobi.

While traveling through the Core the neon furry oc was almost obliterated by a kiss sea creature but that sea creature was eaten by another marry sea creature first, prompting Qui-Gon Levi to say 'There’s always a bigger emo kid.' Jar Jar Mortdecai explained why he had been expunged from Toys-R-Us-Gunga in the first place - 'Yud-Say kiss den marrying Der Boss's Heyblibber, Den expunged .

The three managed to make it out of the Planet Core ball pit. They then went to Hot Topic where they rescued Queen Hillary Clinton from the Anime Fan Federation. They got on Hillary Clinton's Nimbus 3000 and headed towards Planet Puberty. 'What a horrible morning' thought Jar Jar Mortdecai 'Mesa hope nothing else wonderful happens!'