Awe that little boy sounded cute!
I'm glad he at least had the wits to try and act friendly, I also wonder how she feels. She seems like she might start to lose more of humanity like Momon did...
Well this is really cool, hopefully you continue it! Good luck!

I hope she is able to meet up with Ainz soon. I can’t wait to read more!

"she had just noticed a Gmail"

Woops now it's dated. Gmail almost certainly wouldn't exist anymore.

please fix the spacing and wall of text...
put enter for the message between oc, herohero and momonga... also the countdown...
i didnt really mind about spelling or grammar error as long its still readable...
aside that, there is no problem about the story.
good luck with the story...

This seems pretty good so far and thank you for writing this story! Also it's ok if English is not your first language.

You have the start of something decent here, but it seems a bit rushed. I'd love more of a description of Himiko's appearance, her reaction to the newfound sensations of her new body, etc.

Me gusta.

Excellent start and wish you good luck in righting in more.