| Reviews for Bet for a Dance |
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CatWeasley chapter 2 . 4/29 omg no. she's pregnant, I can't even. poor Ron he was finally becoming nature and then this turns into a teen pregnancy story ! |
CatWeasley chapter 1 . 4/29 this is great! so much better than Ron acting like an arse to Hermione. it's nice to see him being so mature. |
Saintzor chapter 6 . 4/10 Hello! I'm aware i'm quite late to the party but I just wanted to congratulate and thank you for such a lovely piece of writing Ron/Daphne is quite rare and it's great to read something of this quality You mentioned in your AN that there'd be an extra chapter and all and I know it's been a while but I just wanted to say I'd very much like to read more of your work :) All the best! |
chemrunner57 chapter 6 . 1/20 Would love another chapter |
MoD Peverell chapter 1 . 1/20/2019 I loved this story. I have just read the first chapter and there are only six chapters but I really really hope it is the completed and is the last chapter. This has one of my favourite characters (Ron) shown in a believable unlike all the bashing docs I have read. The romance and the teenage behaviour is well written (in the first chapter at least, haven't read the others). Mate, whoever you are, keep up the good work. You write very well. Kudos to you. |
redHussar chapter 2 . 1/2/2019 I liked the first chapter and... that's it. It should've been a one shot, without useless drama. |
Kirlial chapter 6 . 12/12/2018 Hey, really nice story. Just discovered it and immediately read the entire thing. Daphne and Ron seemed lovely and I liked most of the other characters reactions to all the events. Glad you didn't make Daphne's parent's one-dimensonal for instance. Quite a depressing, unexpected end! Looking forward to more and hopefully seeing things resolve. |
randver chapter 6 . 12/10/2018 I'm shocked. Life was going so well for the two of them. I hope that the feeling they had for one another survive this tragedy. Some of the strongest marriages with years of loving and care don't survive this type of heart ache. I can only imagine how Ron is going to lose it if someone tactlessly says "well it was probably for the best" Some of the insensitive comments made when people miscarry are beyond stupid to almost borderline cruel. Some of the worst are "well your young you can always have another" like that makes the life lost in anyway less valuable. Women who have had abortions of their own choosing and for the best of reasons still have those moments of "what if" so a young woman who wanted and loved her child is going to have so much heart break. This could, if they allow it, bring Ron and Daphne even closer together because they are the only two people on the planet who know what it was like to lose little Hugo or bronwyn. Others may have lost their own children but only Ron and Daphne lost THEIRS. I'm almost positive that in the pureblood circles a miscarried child is going to be a mark against her, after all the weasley clan is known for IT'S fertility. Those horrible old pure blood biddies will be talking about this for awhile. I do wonder how your going to wrap this one up, I look forward to the next chapter. I have a feeling Malfoy's going to get punched in the face. |
Black Hearted Ninja chapter 6 . 12/9/2018 Wait what 1 chaoter NOOOOOOOOO YOU CANT DO THIS TO ME I LOVE RON X DAPHNE Oh my god i legitamently cried here i had to go back and see if she had actually fallen was begining to curse pansys name there. I am so upset to hear this is nearly the end i really would love to see more RxD fanfictions from you maybe longer ones covering a few years of the story you write so well and every chapter i have felt the raw emotion of every line and word. Please dont leave us i need your writing the RxD lovers need you. |
Hinny FTW chapter 6 . 12/8/2018 Awwwwwwwwwwww, poor Ron and Daphne! Still, a baby at 15 would destroy any relationship, but its sad. Good writing. If I may add a suggestion, let them murder Pansy, or at least drop her in Aragog's lair. |
JBern chapter 6 . 12/8/2018 Gut punch at the end of the chapter. Hope the two of the will get through it together. Wouldn't want to be in Pansy's shoes especially if it wasn't just a tripping hex. Still an interesting story look forward to the conclusion and the sequel. It will be interesting to see how the loss affects both Ron and Daphne. I can't picture Ron reverting to his regular behavior after this. |
Guest chapter 6 . 12/8/2018 Please let them still have a family and get married :( |
Langas chapter 6 . 12/8/2018 Great story. It is interesting to read |
randver chapter 4 . 12/2/2018 Interesting. I can see Ron maturing more and more a little bit each chapter. I love the contrast of reactions between the two houses. One does wonder when Tracy is going to pull her head out of her but and realize Pansy is only using her and not being a friend to her. I know she's hurt and angry about being lied to by Daphne, after all a girls first time is something a best friend is generally aware of even if it was a drunken unmemorable event. I'm guessing it wasn't the fact she shagged the ginger hard body but more along the fact that she lied to her, kept up the lie for a month until the pregnancy forced the issue so yeah that's not being a very good friend. The cold shoulder treatment is not going to stand if Ron has anything to say about it. As her official betrothed I can see him walking over to the Slytherin table at meal times, the whole table looking like he's got huge brass balls, Malfoy near purple with rage and indignation at his audacity and him not caring one fiddles dam about any of them. He's not going to let his future wife be alone if he has anything to say about it and all of snape's detentions, loss of points or anything else wont matter a bit. I can so see Hermione and Harry inviting Daphne over to the Gry's table too so either way this isn't going to stand for long. This entire romantic scene is so Romeo & Juliet it's like huffelpuff fodder so they'll have that faction rooting for them, the ravenclaws will appreciate the honor and the responsibility of the arraignment so they'll be neutral. Like Dumbels said "you not the first couple in hogwarts history that this has happened to" I have no idea how lemmony your going to make the story but the first time the two of them actually make love w/o being drunk is going to either be the most romantic thing they've ever done or a complete disaster. Greta story, thanks for updating. P.S. I almost forgot I laughed out loud when the infamous howler queen herself Molly Weasley said "To use a howler for something like this" I'm like hello Pot have you met kettle! |
DireWolf96 chapter 4 . 12/2/2018 Hoping this new Ron is more responsible regarding his studies now that he has a family to support. I quite like the characterization of Ron and Daphne. Ron is not ooc at all. I'm hoping Harry will also get more focus oriented and responsible like Ron is now. |