Reviews for Air |
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Caribou5150 chapter 1 . 5/10 This is so sweet! |
akeye49 chapter 1 . 4/6 can you write a second one? |
WargishBoromirFan chapter 1 . 11/17/2018 It is a little ironic that you're having a bit of time travel tense trouble, and not in the classic sense of "what will have happened," but in terms of "will wasted" - the future tense "will waste" is more appropriate for the dialogue. There are also a few words missing in other places - the description of Opal's flight suit has all the colors, but none of what they're on, for instance. But despite these, it's a cute concept for how the Gaang found the rest of the sky bison and a bittersweet revelation for Aang. |
foxchick1 chapter 1 . 11/13/2018 Time loops one of the most confusing things in the world. |