Oh my God, this is soooo good and intriguing! A well-written and promising start, my friend, I definitely want you to continue the story :) I particularly liked the transfer from Sasha's point of view to the squad and then to Nile and the MPs...and of course some father-daughter moments with Mr. Blouse and Potato Girl are always nice to read ;)

And man, I pictured Sasha's new look in my head and she'll be sooo badass, her short hair after the time-skip in the manga suited her really well ;)

Can't wait for the next chapter :D

Muy lindo!

I don't mind it. I kinda dig this

The ending is a lot like on how Erwin and Nile would speak and leave everyone on a cliff hanger. This was really good, kudos~

-Master