Hej this is you continue this history please?!

Cuando actualizas y feliz año nuevo

Cool start to the story so far. Can’t wait for the development.

Also, other than the slight problem with Jack being in the harem, the story seems alright so far. I look forwards to the next chapter.

I kinda have a problem with Jack being in the harem. If you're doing it, you should make her older, since canon wise she's physically about ten years old.

What about Frankenstein? Is she going to be in the
harem?

Good luck naruto and satsuki

awesome chapter

I love it, I definitely can’t wait for the rest!

also definitely put shishou too (Scatach) and Medusa , hmm you should I guess instead of Naruto and satsuki dead have them be an immortal like how I guess Scathach is summon I'm not sure how but I'm pretty sure she isn't dead yet lol. also no Jack I think sibling relationship is so much better . she is too young she's a child when she died.

definitely add Fiore on the harem along with Semiramis , have her betray Shirou.

Wow your English sucks. This is an ok premise for a story, but you really need to work on being able to write before you put this out for others to read.

CALL THE FBI! Jack’s in the Harem!

your challenger has Jack in the harem & looking up to Naruto as a surrogate brother. is he going to be an incestuous pedophile? & he doesn't want any mention of rape? you need to clarify this point.

great chapter