Beating the ever loving shi t out of the beared rapist cunt I forgot his name so I'm calling him fuckity mq your gonna get raped by grunts anyways currently getting tortured in a billion ways one right after the other

In other news all terrorist in remenant have been completely wiped out and guess what all there family's are dead in other news remenant,s populace is being evacuated so the planet can be blown up

we cut to the rose task force blowing the compound summer is in to hell whilst summer is in a evac chopper and also the troops are pretty much skull fucking / killing all the terrorist in the base whilst summer has been given a injection of abortion serum do do do in other news Jacques schnee is dead like a pile of ash not even ash just deleted from the molecular level

Alright so we have 1041 bodies now yeah we missed a zero oh and also * pulls out a shotgun and cocks it as ogre awaken starts playing * we have the fucking own army preparing to fucking to to your fan fiction and slaughter all the fucking terrorist criminals racist and so on and so forth now * in soilders voice * ATTACK! ( camera zooms in on the billions of soilders tanks and aircraft going threw a giant ass dimension gate with fortunate sun playing and also a battalion of tank soilders and aircraft with summer rose,s emblem on it )

( holding a clipboard ) alright so let's see i think the body count is 140 now I think

It's alright if you don't want to add her it was just an idea but if you change your mind than i suggest you make the pairing slowburner how you do that is up to you just don't have her immediately fall in love let her feelings build up. Plus it will help that John treats her like a person and not an animal.

Please fix the grammar and names. I don't care if you have to put off writing the next chapter for a year to do so, it need to be done so you don't turn off potential readers!
Why would Cortana be surprised to be find humans out in space? That was their whole thing! They colonized thousands of planets!
Where did the wormhole come from? You can't just do that and not expect us to wonder about it.
Dust and Grimm need more science-y explanations or more of Cortana being befuddled by them. After all, they defy science as the UNSC understands it.
Why does Master Chief settle down in some remote region. How do they access the records of the CCT's?
Why is Summer, a full-fledged huntress, getting trained by Master Chief? That is really insulting.

The Spartan-II's are specifically stated to see each other as siblings, so the protectiveness is understandable.

Although... Canonically, the Spartan-II's have a nonexistent libido due to their augmentations. Wonder how Summer's gonna deal with the fact that John quite literally doesn't have a sex drive?

Ahhh, okay. If this is meant to be a big prologue to RWBY canon's time setting, that makes more sense. I was really wondering why the fic seemed to go way too fast sometimes.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Amazing

Just teasing you but you know she will turn turn heads when she gets older and judging from gun noise, her new dad is beating the boys with a boom-stick.

Whiplashes are annoying.

And behold a new chapter! Team RWBY is finally complete! Now we just need to arrive to that part of the story just to be official! :v also thanks for the garlic and cheese! It helped *I'm saying that while eating said cheese and looking at some ashes* now onto the review: so we have a Borderlands (I suppose?) and Star Wars reference? cool! But now Summer forged a Weapon of Sorrow and was listening to the whispers soo Hive confirmed? Also I feel your pain Cortana I was promised a lemon! But not that kind of lemon holy crap that was so funny! I only saw that happening in another fanfic, ah that really made my day, also for the season of the worty is meh, I play somdays and somedays not, just when my clan play a raid or ask for help I usually play, Trials is fun but man it really is frustrating sometimes, but in world aspect ñs is just DAMN! THE DORITO SHIPS ARE COMING! PREPARE FOR COMBAT! Also for the Guardians Games, it's just another form of bounties, come on Bungie give me something new! And while I respect the the titans some of the are glitch their way to the top, if you want to win at least with honor! Also I really want to play Doom Eternal! I have seen some of the cinematic (The defeat of the Icon of Sin, the Slayers past, and the battle against the Makyr) but anything of the gameplay, I WANT IT! Also did you hear of the problem of the OST? That Mick Gordon just mixed only 11 of the 59 songs!? Bethesda are you an idiot!? For your fault Doom will probably lose his great music! But at least I hear that Mick will release his cut of the songs, *sigh*at least they did something right, so see you next chapter! I'm going for my loot in Pandora! *saying that, while walking to portal with the Hellwalker shotgun (Doom shotgun version in Borderlands) equipped*

Thanks for responding to my comment. And now a question will blue team ever show up in remnant? I've been imagining their reactions to being aunts and uncle and to four adorable nieces.
Another daydream of mine is when the girls join becon John gives them their own personalized sets of ODST armor. Its just such a cool thought to me I can't get it out of my head.
Anyway that said I love this story and hope that you update again soon. BYE!

So far the stories been great but... no. Why did you, just... no

This story is amazing and I love this concept.
I personally have never seen this kind of thing done before although I was pissed at what you made Summer and everyone else go through.
But there is nothing I can do about it I still like the story regardless.
And I hope that John kicks Jaques's ass into the next galexy. Spousel abuse is not okay under any circumstances. So please for the love of God! MAKE! HIM! SUFFER! MUHAHAHAH! Ahem sorry got a little carried away. Anyway I have one last question is this story going to travel into the shows timeline at some point? I really want to see Ruby and wiess meeting for the first time.