update soon

Wait.. does Nathan like Jeanette? I'm a bit confused... Anyways, BUSTED! That Nathan guy should really be carefull

Damn, that Nathan kid is a nerd on the outside but a villain in the inside.

Anyway, can you add a sad ending to this story instead of a happy ending please?

Oh boy, this is getting interesting...!

This story is very good I love it:)

Another splendid yet engaging chapter mate! I hope the story continues 'til we know more 'bout the case. Oh, and there is something I wanted to mention; the more you add description to the characters (like with Jeanette and her being exited about the test), for it makes the reading feel they're inside and living the story. In other words, it make it better. And my other point is the breaks, you know, the paragraph breaks. It makes it easier to read yet makes it appear more professional. Other than that, you have to go on and write the third chapter

Holy shit, this story sounds very interesting. I love it so far.

Gosh this story is so intriguing! This is one of the stories that instantly get you hooked. I wanna tell you mate that you do have a talent that must be used. Continue!

Ooooooh okay you got me hooked! Can't wait for chapter 2...and great plot so far!